Finaste

I wrote this after reading to chapter 10. I didn't like it. First of all, what is with all the Snape love? I mean, I get it, but he was a shitty person as well. He never should have been allowed to teach children. So why all the hate on James? He was a shitty person who tried to grow up but died before he could really change. Then, there is our protagonist, the one who can control people, ban people from the question, and he can even lie about the future. (he told everyone Snape created a werewolf cure) he is already almighty with no real goal. Most of these stories are about gathering power to get to the top, but this has no other goal aside from breaking up James and Lily. At least not in the first 10 chapters. Don't waste your time.

What a boring outcome.

I really wish I saw this before reading the whole thing... there wasn't even an open ending before stopping. Now my mind is stuck and I have to imagine the whole thing myself before being able to let it go.I hope one day your interest comes back and we get to read this one again. I might read your other story when it's finished. It looks interesting but I have no trust in you to start right now. Sorry.

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**** that, if everyone followed the so called "right way" then we would never have anything new and interesting to read. I like your story, I like that he changes, it's a good way to protect those close to him and live however he wants when he's not in character. Write what you want and the people who like it will read it. Unfortunatly people who hate are more likely to comment then people like me who enjoy your writing. Try to ignore the haters as best you can. sorry for the long comment. I hope you continue writing what you enjoy and not what everyone tells you too ❤

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