EbonyFrost

It’s more likely to be the other way around

The highlight of my week is seeing new chapters posted. That being said, I understand your frustrations and misgivings. While I don’t want to see another amazing fan fiction end prematurely or dropped, it’s understandable if you feel you can spend your time and energy on more fruitful endeavors. Regardless, I’ll always be a fan of your work and look forward to supporting anything you do creatively. Thanks for the amazing story and keep up the great work!

Thank you for the amazing chapter!

Thanks for the chapter! See you in a month.

Timelibe seems a bit Off but loving the writing nonetheless

Its hilarious how realistic this is. When I met my fiancée, all my degrees and certifications went out the window and I was braindead

That’s just a cruel and unnecessary reminder of darker times 🥲

I’d recommend downloading the grammarly keyboard app. It’ll correct a lot of these errors for you that take away from the quality of your writing.

Using the term blunt would also be significantly better than "non-sharp edge."

I hope the writing gets a little better as the story progresses. These terms are just atrocious and ruin the flow. Sit down and figure out your power systems and then create a glossary with names for each of them that don't sound like terrible google translate.