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Author i don't understand this sudden fondness for momo the last few chapters. The mc is millions of years old. He may have a simple mind, but he isn't naive. The only person he had any fondness for was the girl in his youth. He has made multiple convictions of how evil humans are. So to now suddenly go back on it by caring that much for momo invalidates all the actions and behaviour he did before this. Hopefully you can explain this to me cause i really don't understand.

I still have hope author, the first few chapters were great. Please don't ruin with trash ai slop. Even if you use AI please refine it better than this chapter.

Whenever a story has a timeskip just so that they can go to canon plot, just know its guaranteed to be trash. An author who can't use the pre-made world to write his own plot lines has no business writing fanfics. If you aren't capable just don't set the story so far back in time.

I should have looked at the reviews before starting. The story is ruined by many things, one being AI. In the beginning it isn’t noticeable, but after a while it becomes so frequent that it ruins the story. The story is already not that good. I still don’t understand the fascination of the MC being a “normal” person. He doesn’t want to become a hero because it’s too dangerous, but he is already the strongest by a mile. Maybe you would think he has a strong conviction to be a normal dude, but no, he still uses his powers if he’s lazy. Maybe then you would think the author will write a great slice-of-life story, but no, it’s just boring, with the MC’s whole persona being the most efficient guy, like he’s a robot or something. I’m sure the author was going for a Nanami-type character from JJK, but the writing just isn’t good enough

Because AI sucks when used wrong. The tone AI has is way to noticable and is the same for all novels. It takes you out of the story.

Okay i have a few points, Writing: The writing in the first few chapters is truly horrendous, i genuinely thought it was written by AI. It does get better but it just gets to the level of an average writer. The most disappointing parts of this novel are the story development and character design. The Mc begins as a robotic character and becomes more distinct, but not in a good way. He becomes a villain willing to kill all and any just for some sweet EXP. I wouldn't even mind it if he had some grand reason why he does it's but so far its just seems like he's power hungry . Because he kills any and every supe he can get his hands on, he gets overpowered very quickly. This power cliff strips any suspense from the story and the mc starts cosplaying other characters just to move the plot, when he can easily take over the world with his 50 clones all as strong as homelander. Eventueel nothing of importance is changed in the story, the Mc is just speed running some things . Do not waste your time on this one.

Just my luck that this doesn't have that many chapters yet. Its an amazing story, fresh and unique. I'm not sure if its because most fanfics are just copies of each others, but reading a unique story brings me so much joy. The whole premise is fascinating and feeds into the character of the Mc which is the main thing that elevates the story. It may sound like I'm glazing this novel but im genuinely tired of reading the same things over and over again

The story line is mostly a rehash of the anime. The Mc being there doesn't really change anything. What is well done is the mc's personality and growth. This combined with writing rarely seen these day on webnovel makes it one of thmost interesting jjk fanfics I've read. The story also flows nicely making it very binge-able.

I meant if its primarily a romance novel . Like half of the story is raven, aleast the the last 10 chapters. It feels very much forced

Is this a romance novel? Whats will all this time spent on raven.