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Warning to readers, this story starts out slow before picking up speed. Only in the 20th chapter and beyond does the main character become the focus. The earlier chapters are “world building” chapters. However, despite having such a slow start, as the story continues, the story progression picks up speed.
I would like to start by saying the story is great and what I mean by giving it such a low score on writing quality is not to criticize the author but rather the translator because this iS machine-translation quality with minimal editing, which is unfortunate as I would love to read more; however with such low quality translations, it is headache inducing to read.