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- Quadan29dReplied to DeathOfDeath
Then quite a lot of Isekai novels would have ended in chapter 1.
"I truly am sorry about this. I took this time to directly apologize to you alright? But what's been done can't be done. It is a fact that you have died, regardless of it being my mistake or not. That is why I brought you into this space instead of letting your soul directly pass on into heaven.", The old man answered in a polite tone. - Quadan1mthCommentedThis book has been deleted.
- Quadan3mthCommentedCh 18 the Path of Control
- Quadan9mthReplied to _hallow_killer_
Only Five gacha, god refused gacha system and if he decided to abandon human body all of them becomes null and void
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Writer created a walking mc instead of crippled one even their inner turmoil are same. As a wish he chose to be reborn as RDA officials son then he goes depressed because he doesn't want be betray pandorans. So question is why reborn as a human then if this was supposed to represent inner turmoil, Jake already does that what is the point. Whole story feels like written without any general direction. I am done reading this.
This book has been deleted. - Quadan9mthReplied to RagingDebtColektor
- Quadan10mthCommented
From using single words to have conversations to whole sentences. Transition felt to fast literally in 1 chapter, made feel like MC got changed. While I understand the usage of time skip, ıt felt like character progression skip as well. Other than that nice work overall.
Ch 27 Ch. 27 Time skip - Quadan1yrCommentedCh 5 No Title
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 34 Playing stupid games
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 88 Chapter 81: Filler??? (Part 2)
- Quadan1yrReplied to Omen_of_Oblivion
Correct word should be "thou" actually too doesn't make any sense in sentence.
I nodded as this was okay,GOD continued"The second wish is also grant able as you would need the knowledge and weapons to counter the supernatural beings in this world,you would be able to teleport that whole building to where you desire.The 3rd wish is also easy." Creator then waved his hands and said"But the last wish is a bit tricky,but still granted.The mirror use will be changed to - Quadan1yrReplied to AuthoriTet
You can't get a contract for FF at least not one that can make writer or publisher earn a direct income from published work. It might be possible to get some sort of round about contract for writers to earn money thorough some fake original novel so you can tie down the writer but it doesn't make much sense for webnovel. Might be possible at China but I highly doubt it.
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 48 Chapter 46 Machine
- Quadan1yrCommented
While what you are writing wasn't perfect your growing was easily observed. From what I see you are making a very common mistake of new writers instead of finishing your story with a slow but steady growth curve, you decided to rewrite. Problem here you will get stuck again in rewrite because your growth is only at level where you drop at first attempt. Instead of rewrite you should finish this story slowly while perfecting your craft overtime then write a new story about same topic or a different one.
Ch 1 Reworking:(