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Tafara

Tafara

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My apologies old little friend

2017-08-02 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Tafara
    Tafara2yr
    Posted

    I will give this series not a full 5 star as the series still in its infancy. hopefully it can develop a more develop outlook of the world he lives in. the chara? well, to be honest is still too far from my expectations. as he is already beyond my imagination because he reincarnated too much, I can't connect with him. the foreshadowing is thrown too early and too much. it's reveal something that unnecessary in my opinion. but, it was also something that I'm looking forward. hopefully this series will be executed neatly, because this level of foreshadowing need a higher level of plot and development before it can creates a greater impact in the future. good luck [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    How to Raise Your Regressor
    Fantasy · Anit666
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  • Tafara
    Tafara2yr
    Commented

    hey this one is surprisingly good starter. now it piqued my interest. Good luck with your contest. I will try to support you. as now I'm not a frequent reader of this app anymore. but hey, at least I will comeback now and then to read your series. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 9 Surprise, Shorty
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    How to Raise Your Regressor
    Fantasy · Anit666
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  • Tafara
    Tafara2yr
    Replied to Dotencsure

    i want a system that can let me have a peaceful life.

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    Binding to Geniuses To Become Stronger
    Eastern · Li Hongtian
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  • Tafara
    Tafara2yr
    Commented

    who is the translator! come to daddy to tell your sin!

    Ch 9 The Decadent Li Shiyi
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Tafara
    Tafara2yr
    Replied to Dotencsure

    what a great man doing here?

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    Since The Red Moon Appeared
    Sci-fi · Ghost of Dark Mountain
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    good chapter, especially the underwear thingy.

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    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    nice story, good pace for the start. can't wait for the main story begin. keep the good work author. hope you well.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 16 A Wounded Symbol of Peace
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    Reincarnated in my Hero Academia
    Urban · LoneSovereign
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Posted

    still waiting for John Wick. By the time of the story, it's still far away from the avenger timeline right? hope to see him in combat with hulk.

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    MARVEL: Killswitch's Origin
    Movies · NightHowl
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    Nice job author

    Ch 37 History Part 1
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    One Piece: Martial Art
    Action · Daoist699789
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Replied to ForgetfulAtheist

    Yes, i agree. This work is actually planned beautifully to have the vibe of being hero. The real ways of hero i think. It's maybe in line with how the heroes made in many literally work. Now this is i called nice webnovel. Not only some rambling chaos writing with a single lines plot that only being thought one night. The real writing work need preparation, a lot of them. 1 chapter a day is ridiculous and bad if you not thought about it before and just go with a flow. A lot of webnovel work now is just like that.

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    One Piece Adventure
    Anime & Comics · I_Am_Immortal
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Replied to MrE

    I too love it if he get paid for his work. But, the point is he as a writer do need to enhance his work to get paid or maybe just get it better for his own satisfaction. That friend over there try to help him as he move forward to make it happens. Not that i criticize you, but just to give some people who might think like we as reader don't need to correct however the author way to write his work. Maybe some author have their own way to express their writing style. But this time is not about it. It's more to how to correct thing so it easier to read and how literally rules world work.

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    One Piece - Martialised
    Anime & Comics · bobbarker12
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    What's happening here? This novel already have so many chapter but no one comments it? Is it good or what?

    Ch 4 The Beginning of the End
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    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    What's happening here? This novel already have so many chapter but no one comments it? Is it good or what?

    Ch 4 The Beginning of the End
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    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Posted

    This is illegal work, hope our smart reader can seen between right and wrong. Don't make this outrageous behavior became a plague in our readers and author alike community.

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    error 404
    Fantasy · jbvyjffthn
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Posted

    Aye, my favorite author. I just found this and literally not read anything. But, without a doubt i will give you 5 star in advance. I just love his work with the other two series.

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    I Possessed a Demon Sovereign
    Eastern · August Eagle
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Posted

    This is really great work. Parody of not just xianxia but also scp foundation work. The higher being thing is also interesting. This novel is wholesome, just like a cheese cake with chocolate foundations.

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    Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4
    Eastern · LivingSpoon
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    Is there any hopes for this novel to be continued?

    Ch 76 Quite Dangerous
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    Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4
    Eastern · LivingSpoon
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  • Tafara
    Tafara3yr
    Commented

    This is the main reason i don't like romance in the action genre, especially harem. They took so much space in the story, for their bunch of girl. We care nothing. Because after the girls in the squad taken down by the mc she just the same with other girls. She lost her own character. Then why bother? If you love harem just make harem novel. Don't bother with other genre.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    In MHA With Madara’s powers
    Anime & Comics · MyStomachHurts
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