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Varthel

Varthel

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2017-07-24 JoinedUnited States
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  • Varthel
    Varthel8mth
    Commented

    I still don't get the relationship he comes from a military family why wouldn't they protect one of their own

    As Ves hung up, he sighed. Seems like he was pretty much stuck with Dietrich. Besides, it might not be a bad thing to develop a closer relationship with the heir of Walter's Whalers. His men could keep an eye on his workshop in his absence. He didn't fully trust his basic automatic security systems to keep out determined thieves.
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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    Varthel8mth
    Commented

    unfortunately this is one of those stories I have to drop for being unrealistic wolves not to mention dire wolves which are supposed to be bigger kill adult males so a 8-year-old who got beat up by other 8-year-olds would be crushed up bones and wolf fecal matter not to mention this is some kid who didn't make it past 10 so it's not like he's some great hunter or mage who was reborn and so maybe have some tricks up their sleeve or experience to fall back on

    Ch 12 Rigorous Training
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    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Varthel
    Varthel10mth
    Posted

    it sucks I don't know if someone was just writing a timeline for their story or what but this is not a novel

    altalt
    The Reincarnated Disciple: Path of the Sacred Sect
    Fantasy · Abdel_Kasi
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    Varthel1yr
    Posted

    Needs a lot of work seem to have some good bones but the execution is horrible. I really believe it should be taken down and rewritten and it will then possibly have a future

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    Starsign Lord
    Fantasy · Pandirom
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    Varthel1yr
    Commented

    is this supposed to say not happy ?

    As he was walking, he still looked at the buildings and other humans from time to time. Of course, he noticed that many of the people were happy.
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    Starsign Lord
    Fantasy · Pandirom
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    Varthel2yr
    Commented

    kind of feels like nonsense you shouldn't be his first day practicing with that wolf so it should be more disbelief that he finally got there then disbelief that he doesn't one day that doesn't make any sense

    Ch 4 Pre-examination Special Training
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    Beast Armorer: Infinite Evolution
    Eastern · Ryden Holk
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    Varthel3yr
    Replied to Varthel

    though I do think it's a scummy thing to do to kill those who are not involved especially when they start killing children and dogs all put me off a mc

    (A/N: Let me know what you guys and gals think about the MC's cultivation method. I have quite a number of ideas in mind regarding its progression but I'm more than willing to change things up if any of you have interesting ideas. For now, I want the MC to focus on the aspects that make him unique rather than having him follow a generic path of cultivation. He will become strong, sure, but, as he has mentioned several times till now, strength is just a means to an end. If you expect him to suddenly start behaving like the psychopathic and murderous MCs found in most cultivation novels, you're probably going to be severely disappointed. He might kill someone who is trying to kill him, but, no matter how you look at it, it isn't 'normal' to believe that wiping out entire clans and stuff is 'necessary' for survival. If you had that kind of power, you could literally just walk away and there is nothing anyone could do to stop you xD...)
    altalt
    Nobunaga Oda's Isekai Cultivation Experience
    Fantasy · GloriousRightFoot
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  • Varthel
    Varthel3yr
    Replied to Zenndreams

    so this is kind of both to you and the author so yes from a optimist standpoint it doesn't make any sense to kill off an entire family if you're strong because you can walk away but the fear that I as a realist would have is if they couldn't touch me what they touch my family you can also worry about being attacked when You're vulnerable and can no longer run away.

    (A/N: Let me know what you guys and gals think about the MC's cultivation method. I have quite a number of ideas in mind regarding its progression but I'm more than willing to change things up if any of you have interesting ideas. For now, I want the MC to focus on the aspects that make him unique rather than having him follow a generic path of cultivation. He will become strong, sure, but, as he has mentioned several times till now, strength is just a means to an end. If you expect him to suddenly start behaving like the psychopathic and murderous MCs found in most cultivation novels, you're probably going to be severely disappointed. He might kill someone who is trying to kill him, but, no matter how you look at it, it isn't 'normal' to believe that wiping out entire clans and stuff is 'necessary' for survival. If you had that kind of power, you could literally just walk away and there is nothing anyone could do to stop you xD...)
    altalt
    Nobunaga Oda's Isekai Cultivation Experience
    Fantasy · GloriousRightFoot
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  • Varthel
    Varthel3yr
    Commented

    little to late for that now

    Wang Hao hesitated for a while, then reached out to grab a few boxes of condoms that were displayed at the counter…
    altalt
    I Can Transform Into a Zombie
    Sci-fi · The Red World
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  • Varthel
    Varthel3yr
    Replied to KneeCapBandit

    Dont really get your comment people are Entitled to their opinion if you don’t like it you don’t have to read their opinions read the story and enjoy

    Ch 14 Black Forest
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    My Dragon System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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    Varthel3yr
    Commented

    Tbh i Will give it a chance but i wont lie i Majorly dislike where the story Is going but will gove it the old 5 chapter try to see if it Can pull my interest back

    Ch 15 Reunion
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    The Son of Time and the Olympians
    Fantasy · mssuigeneris
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  • Varthel
    Varthel3yr
    Commented

    l l she was like meeeee

    My game of Pen Spirit sure is different from others'.
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    My House of Horrors
    Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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    Varthel3yr
    Replied to RealTDA

    thats why u have to play a game that has a seemless leveling system where quests that matter pulls you through it or as you say its boring asf

    Most of the players who had started playing from the beginning were almost to Level 5. There were even some expert-level gamers who had gone past Level 10.
    altalt
    The Truth of Magic
    Games · Miracle Prayer
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    Varthel3yr
    Commented

    so upsetting that this is the true thoughts of game developers these days

    Only rich are the masters, as for the free players, you s**ts can go to hell for all I care.
    altalt
    Dimensional Codex
    Games · Cat from the West
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  • Varthel
    Varthel3yr
    Commented

    Arthas!

    "My son. The day you were born, the very forests of Lordaeron whispered your name…"
    altalt
    Dimensional Codex
    Games · Cat from the West
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