Being honest the cover seems a bit generic to me and the upgrade to khan powers each volume would probably help in making people start to read. Also don't know if u care or will see this but just want to let you know that ur am amazing writer based on this and birth of the demonic sword keep going man. Its nice to read something with the quality of your previous work but with a clearly different plot and main character.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon