Fight could have been better if the league weren't nerfed to be weaker than Omniman. They don't need to be comic accurate but they shouldn't have been overpowered by Omniman specially when he should have been weaken after the slugfest with superman. The way you portrayed him made it look like he's always at peak when he clearly should have been weaken 1st from being imprisoned for a long time and second from fighting superman.

Why does he need to make sure that he isnt prime earth bruce wayne? Is the fact that Alfred is dead not an obvious clue enough? Also i'm disappointed how this super intelligent guy is just riding the coattail of his templates. He would rather recreate what his templates accomplish than create something that makes him a unique existence that isnt just a rick, azmuth, thanos and bruce.

At this point he is more of the characters than himself. Intelligence plus baggage meaning multiversal knowledge from countless ricks then add azmuth who have live thousands of years (meaning thousand of years of experience and baggages) then Thanos who is quiet similar might as well be a reboot to make "yourself" disappear and just be the abomination Bruce Wayne...

Just hope his shoplifting isn't coming out of Innocent employee's salaries.

This failsafe is obviously meant for the dark multiverse batmen. I'm all for that and even can't wait for the showdown but for now. I just want this guy to have an actual father and son conversation with his creator.

Is this 4 horseman of apocalypse an Original setting? (I meant not in dc or marvel thing)

How is he an Omega when Rogue isn't...

Mc needs to suffer from setbacks. He is acting way too inflated in my opinion. He's all ambitions and ambitions even quoting something like "I will break through Eternity itself" as if an Edgy Lizard like him inside a small blue planet actually compare to an entity with universes inside of him. He needs to he humbled and grounded cause he's feeling like a total alien to me than actual human and bit more animal now than just a smart peter parker.

He really settled for a transformation mutation... He better not freak out if his future children ended up being semi-lizard-spider..

Magic in fairy tail doesn't work like that. What your thinking is bleach. Fairy tail guild has won against people who has stronger both in magic skill and power multiple times and that's the excuse you can think of? no matter how strong the opponent is if the enemy got hit and can't extinguish the c class flame. they will eventually lost whether they like it or not if they can't kill this guy. Characters who can probably fight back are S-class level and the like, like Zeref at peak and Blue note at lowest. So... Can you please think first before commenting please? Can you?

His magic is all over the place. Why bother using wind slash when he can just integrate his devil flame to that sword and slash with it. I really doubt it was weaker than that wind slash

How can a C level flame magic has an inextinguishable effect? How are most wizards who aren't fire dragon slayer supposed to deal with something like that??? SMH

His dialogues are kinda cringe. He talk like a good guy trying hard to express himself as a jerk-ish bad guy. He feels like a lesser Redhood atleast imo.

Just wanna put this here: My only issue here is the counterfeit countermeasure. Don't know if author will be able to read this but hope he realized that, because only those who bought a copy can see the work. Hundred years later once those who bought it live their natural lifespan. This books will not leave any legacy and will just be forgotten unless ofcourse someone redraw it or made a lightnovel version (if the counterfeit measure doesn't activate that is) P.s im still at earlier chapter.

My only issue here is the counterfeit countermeasure. Don't know if author will be able to read this but hope he realized that because only those who bought a copy can see the work. Hundred years later once those who bought it live their natural lifespan. This books will not leave any legacy and will just be forgotten unless ofcourse someone redraw it or made a lightnovel version (if the counterfeit measure doesn't activate that is)

He's pretty dumb. Not only is he unaware of his surrounding. He is also potentially creating chaos that doesn't affect him but affect innocent people. Why the f*** does he think giving away and selling those game changing item and potion a good idea? Giving the charisma/charm cloak to a already charismatic person/leader/psychopaths can make them brainwash people. Strength potion in culmination is a budget super soldier serum that could turn a nerd into a potential bully or a criminal average police couldnt stop. Lucky potion in culmination can do as much harm as it can do good. I don't know how his brain couldn't think of the consequences before taking action. He isn't making the world fun. He is making the world lost its balance thus chaos.

Still good. But i find it a bit too exaggerated to say that ALL in-universe game within MCU is a war genre game. Just feels so unrealistic imo.

I mean seriously, guy literally said his dream is to die one day. Wtf.

It's really annoying to read webnovel in the browser (hate the app). Specially so, when it comes to this kind of fiction where source material is mentioned and needed but can't highlight it to activate touch to search thus forced to write it manually.