VladLord

I liked this novel so mach that I decided to read the Raws , and my review is based on the completed story + the extra chapters. I was never a fan of Tokyo Ghoul fanfics but this one is different, when I started reading i was expecting something very basic where the MC clowns on everyone with his MS but to my surprise mc uses his powers sparingly, he's op nonetheless. the story progress is also slow but not too slow(basically it to my liking) in the later chapter it's obvious that the writer wanted to be done with the story which is a shame. Another problem is the romantic interest , romance is well written, but the age of the female lead is kinda weird, a lot of characters recognize the weirdness but ignore it and look for excuses. Closing words: really good story , highly recommend.

Personally I would keep writing this novel , we can call the story until now the 1 Arc where the MC trains and gets op. Arc 2 could be him looking for strong ppl an create an Organization .After that you (Arc 3 ) can focus on side characters that are part of his Organization. Considering that the mc is op we can have power/political struggles inside and outside the Org. these are just some ideas, do whatever you feel like doing.

POV you learned reverse psychology: Plz drop this story now !!! we don't even want to read more .

not the biggest fan of the MCU crossover but the DxD part of the is interesting

i kinda want to watch the actual filler now , does anymore know if its a movie or its hidden in the shipuden filler ?

hope u get better bro . ✌️

Hiki from the Japanese word Hikikomori , because he never leaves his room ( aka his Quirk).

I really like your story. keep it up .

I tried to write but the story is not coming together. I don't know how to transition from one Arc to another and it's full of Plot Holes. So let's just say it's a failed project.

alex