Sahs
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Sahs9 months agoCommentedstupid system....
- Sahs4 years agoPosted
well, first of all , the grammar is really bad . sentences are connected horrendously. explanations are half aszed. charachters are stupid with no personality given.
- Sahs4 years agoReplied to LollipoPReapeR
yea. exactly. the author, also contradicted himself in those sheet talks about source type feys too. we still dont know why ppl need feys if they can cultivate.
- Sahs4 years agoReplied to SinfuLeeCerebral
tell me about it, i wanna drop this one, i think it has no more interesting things to say anymore.
- Sahs4 years agoCommented
author is a master sheet talker
- Sahs4 years agoReplied to Officially_Undead
yea, exactly. most stories lose steam around 30 to 40 chapters
- Sahs4 years agoCommented
how useless can these chapters become
- Sahs4 years agoCommented
useless stuff explained
- Sahs4 years agoCommented
wtf, the story has gotten too muddled with different characters and high fantasy stuff that i cant get the same feeling from this , as it was from the first 50 chapters.
- Sahs4 years agoReplied to Perverted_clock_23
nice Is it yours? If it is, nice work, and keep going, make a novel or short story like that.
