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TruthSetsYouFree

TruthSetsYouFree

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  • TruthSetsYouFree
    TruthSetsYouFree2yr
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    It is not about the character losibg an aram. But the process. A guy who can 1 strike the kyuubi would suddenly lose to 2 weak old guys. Which even if you say are kage level are still weak according to how strong you described your character. It is not like he did not know he was going to be attacked, he was actually prepared for it. The main character fought an army with a single look. There is observation and arnament haki. Whatever you say, bottomline is you made your character weak in that fight. For me it is to the point that you already disrespected your own character and writing. You set his strength standard to high and then suddenly brought it down to oblivion.

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    Naruto: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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    TruthSetsYouFree3yr
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    Well what can I say... The writing is good but the development is way... Way too forced to the point of I can call the mc an idiot for his decisions...

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    Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
    Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
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    TruthSetsYouFree3yr
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    The mc was raped in the beggining of the story by druggies. Author if you are going to add please add a warning tag on the story so that some of us wont be disgusted by your story

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    Dropped This Shitty Story
    Anime & Comics · JustACommonReader
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