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HolyScheisse

HolyScheisse

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2017-07-28 JoinedTurkey
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse1mth
    Replied to Magecrafter

    I get what you mean in your review, and I'm not against these tropes they have become this common for a reason, after all. They are easy to work with and relatable or easy to understand so the audience doesn't feel lost. What I'm saying is that this is not a good implementation of these tropes. Characters feel like they belong to those those older, low quality wuxia novels. There is nothing wrong with simple characters, but making them boring/ too one dimensional or too on the nose is a problem. Writing should be more subtle and nuanced, and rather than characters/ side characters declaring their traits and desires, we should see how they act, react, and make decisions to deduce them. I think you will write some good stuff in the future, but this novel feels like you started low and are learning as you go rather than having a solid base writing level.

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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse1mth
    Posted

    It is basically in the same class as tasty trash food. If you are fine with wasting your time and all the clichés you are used to and the weird reasonings or events that feel like the author had an idea and simply was rushing towards it rather than building and shaping a real world or a story that unfolds to them, it is a decent read.

    altalt
    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse1yr
    Posted

    Simply amazing. Give it a shot and you won't regret it. Characters are generally unique and while we still don't know much about the world it is very interesting. There are some spelling errors here and there but it won't ruin your experience.

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. Amazing work as always.

    Ch 364 Date
    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse2yr
    Replied to Rappel

    My dude, the author spent entire chapters about this pure trust and how this species experiences feelings differently than humans and how amazing that you can have this unique interaction with them and you just think of making a harem out of this. Unbelievable.

    Ch 356 Trust
    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse2yr
    Commented

    Why so short :(

    Ch 349 Thief
    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse2yr
    Commented

    Did he just stop writing this novel? Is it abandoned?

    Ch 324 Affection
    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse2yr
    Posted

    Incredible work of art and a must-read novel that is plagued with the worst updating stability I have ever seen on this site. I would suggest everyone to give it a go but starting whenever the author finishes his first novel would be a wise decision.

    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • HolyScheisse
    HolyScheisse3yr
    Commented

    fitting title I would say

    Ch 1258 1258. Slow approach
    altalt
    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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