Lord_Of_The_Drip

fuck this bitch ass author

unfortunately, this is an abandoned book.

abandoned book

so many missing parts...it's like the author doesn't care for us...

The book was full of the usual tropes and I suppose it was ok, but in the end, it took a ridiculous racist and nationalist turn. Don't waste your ti.e reading past chapter 100

this chick is just giving away all of his secrets to some random strangers. remember boys, never let a broad knock you off your grind.

fkin bullshit

I think the author is new and I just want to provide a bit of feedback. I'm happy with smutty books in general, but your main character is wildly inconsistent in character and that makes him unrelatable. You have built a world with traditional values, but most of the women characters, including his siblings, abandon everything that they have been taught to value, including their marriages and family for dick. At least give the MC some high charm stat to account for the irrational decisions. Also, you neglect major details in the development of these situations that make them difficult to follow. If you can correct these things, I think you have the potential to be a really good author!

This shit makes no sense

ugh