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ronueda

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  • ronueda
    ronueda2yr
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    The story is passable but the translation quality suddenly dropped later. It's like the translators changed and didn't bother reading the previous translation so it gets confusing to the readers. More like machine translated with a bit of editing.

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    Hide in the Banished Palace and Level Up To A Big Boss
    Eastern · Three Feet Divine Sword
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  • ronueda
    ronueda2yr
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    This would have been a good read if the numbers and names don't change so confusingly. For example, it says Roaring Dragon Invincible is the leader of the group and in the next sentence after, it says Roaring Dragon Ruinous Star. Another example is with the currency. A 30 million credit value becomes 3000 credits in the next chapter. I don't know if it is the author messing it up or the translator is just butchering it. It's like someone put the story in MTL then improved the structure and grammar, then every few chapters, someone else who hasn't read the previous chapters does the editing.

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    Fatal Shot
    Games · Shi Yao
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  • ronueda
    ronueda3yr
    Commented

    So the appraisal tower alone is as big as the whole Silvermoon City

    This appraisal office would have been more accurately called an appraisal "center." It was a luxurious building with an area of more than 100,000 square meters and a height of more than 130 floors. There were countless floating cars in the area, as well as countless players entering and leaving at every moment.
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    Fatal Shot
    Games · Shi Yao
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  • ronueda
    ronueda3yr
    Commented

    tenets

    And he really was. Looking down on these young Legionaries filled him with pride. They were good people, strong people. They had sacrificed, fought, upheld the tenants of the Legion and proven their mettle. They gave him hope for the future.
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • ronueda
    ronueda3yr
    Commented

    not true

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • ronueda
    ronueda3yr
    Posted

    MC is not brain dead. Progression of the characters is quite good, gradually improving and not always OP. Writing is superb, very understandable which is quite rare in this platform. I've binged up to chapter 140 at the time this review was written. This novel deserves to be at the top. One of the best non-human MC stories here.

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    Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
    Fantasy · Pwnzer
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