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this is a spoiler, but if you look at around chapter 1180 the name of the Thor mech was even mentioned on the title of the chapter. the development of the Thor mech will play an important role on Planet Onderon's story arc
the Goliath mech
the Warhound mech
umm, there wasn't supposed to be Thor Mecha (much less the Odin) here yet, I think it's talking about the Goliath mech and the Warhound Mech in the original text. I'd suggest against changing it since the development of the Thor Mecha will become an important plot point later on
I was thinking more like the phonetic pronunciation of the Chinese characters instead of the translations. like Meng Luna and Huan Luna
I think it's better to keep the Luna sisters' given name in Chinese, naming someone Dream and Phantasm sounds a little weird
what he looks like. if you look for it on youtube you should be able to find the video
here's of the top off my head from Homeworld: only the tech of the spaceships and even the landcrawlers from Deserts of Kharak from Starcraft: - Rory Swann - Nova - Gabriel Tosh - Matt Horner - Mira Han - the Protoss as a race but exclusively the Nerazim From Mass Effect: -Fem Shepard -Jeff Moreau -Kaidan Alenko -Ashley Williams -the Geth -the Salarians from Sins of a Solar Empire: -the Vasaris but only the rebel faction from Halo: -John 117 aka Masterchief -Dr Halsey -the Kig Yar -the Huragok from Resident Evil: -Sherry Birkin -William Birkin -Annette Birkin -Alexia Ashford -Alfred Ashford -the T-Virus zombies -the Umbrella Security Services' Wolfpack from Command and Conquer Generals - General Leing Leang - the rest of American and Chinese Generals - a special Black Lotus hacker Codename: Super Lotus from Marvel: -Doc Octavius -Baron Zemo -Peggy Carter -a spoof on Captain America named Shi Aimin from House of Cards: -Frank Underwood -Claire Underwood -Doug Stamper from Lord of War: -Yuri Orlov -Vitaly Orlov from Freelancer(a game): -Edison Trent (the first legendary character that got awakened) from Galaxy on Fire: -Keith T Maxwell from 007 series: -James Bond -Mrs. M from Internal Affairs II -Ngai Wing-Hau from Metal Gear: -Big Boss
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this protag is getting a bit annoying, (the medical protag not mc, I love mc) maybe next time we get a long staying protag you could make them have a little better personality or a little more competent? It's just so annoying how he kept getting saved when he has absolutely no reason to. also O kinda wanna see a different protag with new heroines, this one didn't even have 1 extra heroine so it's kinda boring just my thought tho, you don't need to change anything just because I said this
who's Felix?
huh, looks like the protag's aura affected our MC too, didn't expect him to let a prey go like this
huh, I forgot her name was Mjollnir, which means we haven't met Thor yet, wonder if Hela left her at the other dimension to hold the fort
dude do waay too much fast forward, do 0 side quests, and then wonder why his servants are so underleveled, smh...
just in case, where's this chapter supposed to be placed in the timeline? is it right after the last one? if so, it'd be better for continuity sake just to say that MC went back home and met the mother, if not you could just say when this part happens anyways, glad you're trying to fix the copy-paste chapters of Gu Xiang, I'll be waiting to see the proper version of it!!