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binged when it had 29 chapters, good story, well written and feel like the make of a decent HP Fanfic, hopefully it doesn't get discontinued like alot of FanFics. Keep up the great work and a High recommendation to read to anyone who wants to actually read a good HP fanfic. though i feel it would be better to ready once it atleasts gets to 50 chapters as though 2 to 3 years has passed in the 29 chapters most of that time skip was in the like 2 chapters
I really don't think a wizard power has anything to do with if a elf can apparate them. A strong wizard or witch can stop it from happening but elf magic is different to Wizard/witch magic, hense why wards and that don't stop elfs from apparating.
love the chapter, I would like to see chapters like this. Doesn't mean i don't like the others but sometimes its just game release to game release. if you kept the dates to the same to the original release dates this could be a novel that would be educational as well lol
gah a 1000 chapter cyberpunk fan fiction and you choose not to, honestly I had been hoping to find a good fanfic that was decent length I get annoyed at novels that are to short or multi worlds. I am in two minds, if at the end of the 60 chapters the story is tied up nicely then I don't mind but I'll hunt you down if the MC and powder haven't gotten together.
pacing could be sped up but only really when it revolves around the original story, though I still like it, I would recommend not changing it, clearly it's working so speeding things up may ruin the pacing. I would love to see some more wizard fights well then to go into more detail.would like to know if there is gonna be any romantic aspects to this novel ?