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Zinion

Zinion

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2017-07-19 JoinedAustralia
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  • Zinion
    Zinion2d
    Commented

    can you change the word Apparate to "POP", you explain what he does and to Apparate they don't need to say it

    Ch 8 the burrow
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    Harry Potter: The combat instructor
    Anime & Comics · AssClappicus
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  • Zinion
    Zinion18d
    Commented

    you should really use poke dollars for the currency

    Ch 5 A fool's dream
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    Pokémon Court
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  • Zinion
    Zinion18d
    Posted

    binged when it had 29 chapters, good story, well written and feel like the make of a decent HP Fanfic, hopefully it doesn't get discontinued like alot of FanFics. Keep up the great work and a High recommendation to read to anyone who wants to actually read a good HP fanfic. though i feel it would be better to ready once it atleasts gets to 50 chapters as though 2 to 3 years has passed in the 29 chapters most of that time skip was in the like 2 chapters

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    A Wizard's Solitude
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  • Zinion
    Zinion19d
    Commented

    good chapter

    Ch 79 Last big prank II
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    Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
    Book&Literature · Nathe07
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  • Zinion
    Zinion19d
    Commented

    my only issue with this chapter is, your pushing to much of the normal James personality, granted i get hes having fun, but from previous chapters he likes studying and learning so these bits don't make sense to me much

    Ch 42 Hogwarts Library
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    Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
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  • Zinion
    Zinion19d
    Commented

    thought it is pretty much a rip of from the harry potter serious, still liked the race and unknown willow, as it was planted the same year Lupin came to Hogwarts. so good chapter.

    Ch 38 Talk with the Head of Gryffindor House
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    Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
    Book&Literature · Nathe07
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  • Zinion
    Zinion22d
    Commented

    welcome back

    Ch 127 Chapter 124: Halthor Sector Campaign Episode II
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    Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    feel like you missed a chance for Bryan to flex his magic here, like forcing the water away from the cave entrance.

    Ch 261 0260 The Cave (Part-1)
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Replied to FicFrenzy

    magic doesn't really follow logic though, not overly fussed just so use to other novels having house elf magic on a different "spectrum" so to speak as wizard same way how fawks can transport people with aperation blocks.

    Ch 260 0259 The Unknown Hero (Part-2)
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    good lord can you change that to the Philosophers stone, seriously hate how it was change to sorcerers stone in America, literally the only country that changed it

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Ravenclaw of Hogwarts (HP)
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    I really don't think a wizard power has anything to do with if a elf can apparate them. A strong wizard or witch can stop it from happening but elf magic is different to Wizard/witch magic, hense why wards and that don't stop elfs from apparating.

    Ch 260 0259 The Unknown Hero (Part-2)
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    love the chapter, I would like to see chapters like this. Doesn't mean i don't like the others but sometimes its just game release to game release. if you kept the dates to the same to the original release dates this could be a novel that would be educational as well lol

    Ch 387 A peek to Shin's life I
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    Tycoon of Video Games
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Replied to FicFrenzy

    OOo tonks, honestly, I wasn't expecting that, but atleast good to see that you have an idea about it

    Ch 240 0239 Thoughts
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    gah a 1000 chapter cyberpunk fan fiction and you choose not to, honestly I had been hoping to find a good fanfic that was decent length I get annoyed at novels that are to short or multi worlds. I am in two minds, if at the end of the 60 chapters the story is tied up nicely then I don't mind but I'll hunt you down if the MC and powder haven't gotten together.

    Ch 222 Another Important!!
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    Arcane: Champion Witness System
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    good start, but really get rid of that last line...

    Ch 1 The Start of a Legend!
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    The Conqueror Of Cities!
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    actually hate how Tsunade is portrayed in this novel...

    Ch 190 [Sponsored] Chapter 190: Under the Moonlight...
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    P2W Uchiha in Konoha (Completed)
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  • Zinion
    Zinion1mth
    Commented

    pacing could be sped up but only really when it revolves around the original story, though I still like it, I would recommend not changing it, clearly it's working so speeding things up may ruin the pacing. I would love to see some more wizard fights well then to go into more detail.would like to know if there is gonna be any romantic aspects to this novel ?

    Ch 240 0239 Thoughts
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    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
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  • Zinion
    Zinion2mth
    Commented

    MAGIC YAY

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: Zombie Dungeon!
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    HP: A Sociopath Gamer In Magic World
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  • Zinion
    Zinion2mth
    Commented

    .... agian with the swinging a stick... jesus efing crist.... MAGIC

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Drops!
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    HP: A Sociopath Gamer In Magic World
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  • Zinion
    Zinion2mth
    Commented

    sigh..... MAGIC

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: New Skills!
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    HP: A Sociopath Gamer In Magic World
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