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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    It will be amazing when we finally get the reveal of who Lilith is truly and her relationship with Sirius

    Ch 1082 Sacrificial Love & Possessive Love (Part 1/2)
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    to be continued

    Ch 27 Friend or Foe?
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    Sanctuary Annihilation Online
    Fantasy · Aucheras
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    "I'll make you an offer you can't refuse."

    Ch 768 Daoist Eternal Weapon
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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
    Fantasy · rRandom
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    dudes stats are around what a traditional level 30 would have based off math. He could have no class and would still be overpowered. nobody else has the power to increase stats except by leveling. At this point MC is God as they're only 1 year into the apocalypse and it's doubtful anyone is capable of grinding that much exp since highest grade was an "A" in history and only 1 skill per person. MC is basically 20 people in 1 at this point. Give him healing so he can solo the entire world and call it a day

    Ch 18 Class Certificate, Complete the Transition to a Hidden Class!
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    Global Towers: Starting With The SSS-Rank Talent, God-Tier Extraction
    Fantasy · Light Tower Ascension
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    Wasn't it stated after 7 days the people who couldn't enter tower level 2 would be sent out? What would the point of sending people into the towers if the chance of leaving is less than 90%? Also, dudes stats are like a level 20 person but are only "slightly" higher than a normal level 3. The stats and levels don't seem to be fleshed out properly .

    Ch 14 Beast Tide Comes, Fortunes and Risks Come Hand in Hand!
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    Global Towers: Starting With The SSS-Rank Talent, God-Tier Extraction
    Fantasy · Light Tower Ascension
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Replied to XIETIAN

    Yeah, its almost like people don't read your story. He had a 20% buff from the title and literally doubled his strength stat when he 1 shot the one 3rd order. Then you explain how he destoryed a City fighting the other 3rd order that's almost the size of a country. If Bai isn't holding back the bridge literally is destroyed by a casual swing in the wrong direction

    Ch 532 Entering into an alliance with the mermaid princess Xian Mei'er
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Replied to Noblesse_cookie

    She meant she had the power to end him at anytime. Also, a message to Bai that the base isn't full of weaklings

    Ch 401 Clever and witty Shen Mei (Part 1)
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Replied to thefirespeaks

    Thanks! I make sure to read the chapters before posting and then rereading out loud so it sounds right and flows. I felt telling the story present tense allows the reader to feel more involved in the scene.

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    Sanctuary Annihilation Online
    Fantasy · Aucheras
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Posted

    The story introduces the MC early. It is a human who has healing ability granted by there bloodline. As they lay there dying, it just so happens one of the Lords of the existence happens to reside in a flower they are holding. The Lord of stars is this entity and it merges with our MC. Some fun exchanges occur and the Lord of Stars decides it is in its best interest to help this human along the path of evolution. Absorbing the different bloodlines and abilities our MC grows more powerful with each beast killed and devoured. An interesting concept and leaves it up to the Author to give us an unlimited amount of different ways the MC can be developed. I look forward to the final result. The writing is mostly in first person perspective through the MC's eyes. It can take a bit to get used to as most books on WN are done third person. The world background is fleshed out from the beginning of the novel and given to us in a unique info dump way. I give the update stability a 5 because the Author dropped 20+ chapter right out of the gate. We will see if the Author has any remaining stash chapters or if this is the writing speed then this will be one of the fastest updated books on the site. Keep up the good work.

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    Starborne Warrior
    Fantasy · Rathowm
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    Was expecting you to have him follow all of the paths for a moment.

    Ch 2 Lord of Stars
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    Starborne Warrior
    Fantasy · Rathowm
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Commented

    Your story is pretty good, I would recommend downloading Grammarly for the main PC you type and edit on. It'll help you catch some of your mistakes. You can delete this comment after you read it. I put it in the paragraph comments so it isn't plastered everywhere. I saw your post on the forums asking for a honest review and help with anything we see in your work. Another thing would be to split up the conversations between different characters into separate paragraphs. It's a webnovel and people are used to have one line paragraphs. It makes it easier to read the dialogue between your characters. The dialogue is very well done and when read aloud, sounds like an actual conversation that can happen amongst friends.

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    In the end you weren’t worth it
    Teen · AlixGHF
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras1yr
    Posted

    Pretty good story so far. A couple of errors were spotted in the writing, but it does not take away from the story. As far as love interest novels. The MC seems like she's fallen pretty hard. Keep up the good work!

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    In the end you weren’t worth it
    Teen · AlixGHF
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Replied to Time_Zekrom_4361

    Haha I can prob do a chapter for you. Glad you're enjoying the novel!

    Ch 16 [Bonus] The Seventh
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    Sanctuary Annihilation Online
    Fantasy · Aucheras
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Posted

    This is a nice story so far. I hope the author decides to continue with it. The character interactions are witty and fun to read. The video game aspect is nicely done and I know it's Minecraft, but it also reminds me of watching the Lego movies. Nicely done.

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    Minecraft Dungeons {Rise Of The Heroes}
    Video Games · Queen_Endi
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Replied to HaracasAye

    What kind of combat would you like Nathan to use?

    Ch 15 First Blood
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    Sanctuary Annihilation Online
    Fantasy · Aucheras
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Replied to Time_Zekrom_4361

    A magician never tells ;). Appreciate your support! Glad you're enjoying it.

    Ch 13 You're All Going to Die
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    Sanctuary Annihilation Online
    Fantasy · Aucheras
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Posted

    Good novel so far! The story is going at a decent pace and the world building is great. I hope the author sticks with it because this is a gem.

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    Mind Linker
    Fantasy · BlackSnowAngel
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Commented

    Thanks. Cool for you to give the perspective of what the Death Eaters are feeling with the return of the mark.

    Ch 134 August 25, 1994: As The Night Sets
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Commented

    I hope you don't believe your aquatic vault arc was boring or too descriptive/narrative. I felt it was well fleshed out and showcased Quinn's progression in magical learning. I was able to read it from beginning to end and not as you released it. Maybe that's why people complained? Don't let people's comments derail your vision of developing a beautiful story. Not every chapter has to be action packed .You're story is well developed and a joy to read. Keep up the good work!

    Ch 123 Mastering Apparition, Plans, and Dreams
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Aucheras
    Aucheras2yr
    Commented

    shout out to other webnovels. A true transmigrator.

    Ch 2 I Have Great Expectations For You
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    No Way Anyone Believes That My Master Is A Mortal?
    Eastern · Do You Eat Cabbage?
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