Thanks for the chapter. Roger is sick, so there is no use saving him. But I hope he can get along with Ace, maybe take over for Whitebeard when it comes to being a father. I also hope to see more of Regina, hopefully it will be her pairing.

So far I like the story, but I hope it stops presenting itself as Gol d. Anne. Ace was saved from being killed by the navy or enemies of his parents by bearing the last name of his mother. The Navy learned of his identity late and by then he was a member of Whitebeard's crew. If he's smart he would have to think of his brother and use Portgas. As for the crew, I would rather he didn't join Luffy like all the stories with brothers and sisters.

I think it means that it has to be in the novels section, not fanfiction. And do you have the link to the original? I can't find it.

Thanks for the chapter. As for devil fruits, you could give Sabo the Mera Mera no Mi and get Enel's Goro Goro no Mi. It would also be interesting if you recruit Jewerly Bonney.

At last a One Piece fanfiction without religiously following the Canon, having wishes or having a system.I hope he has some canon girl in the harem, maybe save Kuina?