gotta feel for the protag here

hmm.. very interesting 🤔

Can't quite truly rate the updating stability it the World background but so far the writing itself has been good, character design is there for sure and you can definitely picture the story developing in the near future.

could always have Xiao Hua kill him to reset if that happens. Gotta remember it's not like the real world, if she saw him suffering like that and he asked for it, she'd do it.

He only has a like 5-6 years worth of cultivation at this point does he not? and that's a generous estimate... How is he at the elders level already??

he can't catch him? tf is the point of the red flame wings then?? if he can use them to escape he can use them to chase

story seems interesting and characters seem to be unique and different from normal novels but the grammar is too hard to understand. as is it's completely unreadable for me.