Bigwall1296
39 year old father and stepfather. I'm a carpenter by trade and author by hobby.
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The story is good but it would be better if you have some type of indication when you're switching point of views so the reader is more aware of the change. It gets a little confusing when you're suddenly reading about another character or from another character's point of view unexpectedly.
That is deep on so many levels.
Actually Kira had white fur. He was as strong as he was despite having white fur. He was the same as the rest of his clan. that's also why Aella is white also, both of her parents were white.