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I mean when you think about it. Having a katana shaped lightsaber makes no sense at all. Lightsabers have no edge, they cut in any direction. By giving it a bladed shape, you actually make it lesser than the normal ones
Just remove the weeb BS
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Please make it so. I know last chapter you said it wasn't the case, but it isn't in story so far. You already said the dreaded words: "not OP"(words that are usually said when everything points at that the MC SHOULD be OP...) But don't make it a ability that cannot grow, otherwise it's just too weak (compared to him) Especially when you gave telekinesis to a non-MC OC... OP is not an insult
It's like watching a trainwreck in slow motion... Why do you have to write Canon... If it happens the same way, don't write it in such details...
Alright, this is where I'm noping out
Best way to break trust, thank you for the clarity. I'm out
Wasn't that 2 days prior?
It's really starting to look like you're taking any opportunity you can to prevent the plot from advancing...
Couldn't get the first word right?
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I might be a little harsh, butt the writing lowers everything, and not because of the usual reasons. The real problem is not the language, but the sentence construction. The author is probably aiming for some kind of flowery prose, but it just doesn't work. Reading this is a decoding exercise. And it came to the point that most of the time, the sentences end up not making sense...
It's really becoming unbearable...
Listen mate, Honestly, I don't want to read the chapter of this is all this is about. But more than that, why the F do you keep insulting your readers?
Why? It makes no sense at all!
Stop it with the "BOOMS"! It's getting really annoying!
Why?
And yet you somehow managed to make it boring. Congratulations
Lost me at the use of '&'. Seriously, is 'and' a complicated word to write?