mcvamulv

I've only read the first 40 chapters, so this review is based on that. Found the premise and the world interesting, but the story really poorly written. The timeline in the story jumps all over the place, and many times making it hard to keep up at times. Felt like when he traveled that he left the town, something happened on travel, and then he arrived at destination within like 10 lines. Sometimes felt like parts of the story was missing, and when i switched chapters i had to go back and forth a couple of times, because i thought i missed a chapter. And after 40 chapters(hopefully changes later) i dont really understand why the daughter is even in the story, i feel like if you replaced the daughter with some random person, it would change nothing in the story at all.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon