lonelyrose

dear author I am here re-reading and missing you. I hope you are well and you may one day return to us. sincerely one of your faithful readers

I like this webnovel not because it's kind of generic into/basic plot line. but because the way the author writes it. there is no consistent petty misunderstandings or the FML getting kidnapped every other chapter. yes the MC does run into problems. there are fights, face slapping and kidnappings. but after it gets resolved you get time to see the characters develop in their roles, relationships and their family. anyway the only reason I put 4 stars on translation is due to the constant gender swapping of she/he that kind of thing. it's a little more annoying when you are just meeting a character or it's been a while since you've seen them.

so honestly, I'm not very far into this novel, but I felt compelled to make a review. I am at chapter 30, and the title does not do this novel justice. the title made it feel like a wish fulfilled novel where the Mc gets rich, makes lemons, and slappes people in the face. but really it seems pretty wholesome with a realistic Mc. whome is yes perverted but is realistic. he struggles with the "do I make a move? I'm probably just imagining that she likes me" normally I would find that mindset to be annoying. but in this novel there is a reason for the Mc to be "dense". I may update this later, but I am excited to see the character development, not just being the Mc but other characters as well. I actually hope this does not become a wish fulfilled novel because I think it has so much more potential that that. regardless of to name

hello. so I've being blue balled alot. are you coming back or are you dropping this? it's being 4 months. I just want to know should I hope or should I drop this from my library? finally if I'm going to keep this can I get at the very least and estimate on when you'll come back?

so I began this novel looking for an mc who had power and had no bs reason on why to hide it. it was great at the start. then idk if the editor left or something but it all feels like mtl that you need to decipher. but that's fine if the story was great, recently though i feel like the mc is a weak willed scumbag. I wont go into to much detail but the mc has an incredible woman that loves him whole heartedly and he loves her. but he randomly starts having sex on the side. like the first one not great but at least it had a "good" reason. then the second even if you ignore the fact that he is cheating without his SO's knowledge it was with her daughter and he knew it. but he just couldn't say no because he is weak willed. finally I'm on chapter 104 and he has slept with a different random girl because idk he can and he is actively attempting with another. all the while worrying about his main girl finding out.

so I'm not very far into this but the story is great, the back story makes sense it's not that it happened because it happended which is nice there was thought put into it. I have not seen any grammar errors or gender swaping so great job author/editor whom ever did that. the only reason I didn't give a full 5 stars is it only updates 6 times a week and I'm impatient but at the same time quality things take time. but then the character design... the mc is built really well I like his personality. but what gets me and why I put the spoiler tag. the mc when he first joins the new world he is relived that he has the dagger mastery because he always played the sneaky stabby kind of character. then out of no where he suddenly doesn't like knifes and he wants to use a spear.

so I'm only on chapter 50 while I write this, I will update later when I read more. so I notice a lot of grammar errors. by that I mean use of the wrong word for example the word taste is never used it's always test and she/he are wrong once and a while. it's not a big deal you know what the author is trying to say. the story is very slice of life at the moment. mostly revolving around the fmc and how she believes every male around her to be an idiot. the male mc doesn't get a whole lot of screen time but when he does he just feels like a push over and I haven't seen a lot of character development with him. it has being mentioned that other people see the emotional struggles he shows but nobody really does anything to help. they just kinda say "oh this other person will help" or at least that's how it feels to me finally I think my review sounded mostly negative but I do think this can be a great novel once the characters grow a little bit. I see a lot of potential in it and I fully believe the author can make that happen.

I have no idea honestly. I am in the middle of bulking chapters because I'm hoping that way when I do read it the story will progress a little bit

author I let the chapters stock pile for a while but I'm back and your novel is as beautiful as ever. keep up the great work.