jer0055

milking the story too much . I get it the more chapters the more money ro be made, but come on

garbage recycled content over using the same poor guy doing odd jobs

just recycled chapters change the team name and same thing written....

going back and forth when you thing the story is progressing boom it changes to a random arc full of recycled chapeters

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so is this on hiatus too now?? like the other two books ??? seems like this author can't stick to a book for long before starting a new one the doing the cycle again

why include so many words from previous chapters onto the new ones?? doubt it's to help people keep track of what happened on last chapter. seems more like a way to pad the word count

getting tired of the author just milking a story that should of ended in two chapters with just nonsense

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too much extras to milk a chapter repeating thing many sentences as if you are listening to a radio show...