you did a good job just keep doing the same from before space them trought the story

Dorne are not mad about the rebelion, they are mad that Elia and her children were raped and murdered and our boy was the only one who demanded justice that is important in a medieval society, oberyn may still be mad but Doran will appreciate the gesture and see a opportunity, I'm not even gonna address the Magic statement have and see that what you wrote makes 0 sense

having your liege lord disliking you is not good, it limits the kinda of shenanigans our boy can get himself into, specially if said liege lord is closer then a brother to a warmonger king who likes to smash heads In, the lanisters can't do much to a tank of a man who is a precog

honestly the rant even if not planned is gonna give him lots of benefits, nobody rly likes the lanisters and the people who do already think poorly of jorah and with this move Ned will probably respect him more, Robert in a few years to, Dorne will instantly like him so all in all a good move

also galactus with 4 planets is kinda unbeatable, I mean I think knull could mind control him with the symbiotes but in raw power galactus easly folds almost anyone

I remember the first version of this story it was quite good, now author both emma a laura are top tier, but I'm starting the petition to add ororo she is quite underused, and her elemental powers would round up the Harem nicely telepaty, melee combat and elemental ranged powers

good choice specialy against spiritual beings, that were very anoying to deal in the novel, CE is a very good buy, and if you can buy hax abilities is so much more busted, just the 6 eyes would boost his control and and precision to a new lvl with the force to probably

julius obviously has some kind of mind power

you know what both are good, but obviously the the current captain is superior

sorry for your girlfriend situation hope you feel better, i think the mc should go for the second division, for his speed and for the captain...

It's fine dude good luck on your exams

tsunade is a kage lvl medic shinobi with years of experience and fought 2 mega wars I dont think its a fair comparison

hey author depending on the timeline there is a certain female in naruto that is godly at medicine is attractive and is kinda depressed how about you kill 3 birds with one stone and take tsunade to God's dimension if team China could do it with imothep you can do it with the super nurse

I see all good keep up the good work

All the changes are prety fair it will be a bit disappointing the no rewards other the items when returning to world's but I get that not abusing it would be pretty stupid so it's a fair change the genetic constraints changes are pretty good to and I agree with you after the 3 one it invalidated one of the coolest things of the story the character builds, I still have a couple of questions but u can not answer them since it will be revealed sooner or later, in the novel to become a leader u need the approval of the guide is it the same thing here, and about the timeline is it the same one of the mc of terror infinity?

all good ty

you should check it out the first couple of missions are quite good then loses it self towards the end like most chinese novels do but still quite enjoyable to read

I have some questions regarding how close you are sticking with the rules of terror infinity I don't know if you already answered them somewhere I didn't see, if this is faithful with terror infinity our mc will have a clone one team devil due to his potential, and will also be invited to team celestial for being a leader also the teams in the realm are separated between continent with the exception of team devil and team celestial thats all hope you can clarity it for me loving the novel until now btw

speaking of Rome a setting that I imagine your style fitting like a glove is Spartacus specialy the later seasons could do with your brand of practicality

the daynes are the second or at most the 3 more powerfull house in Dorne not to mention that G.R.R probably has big plans for them shame we prob wont see them