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Thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

All in all it’s really good if nothing else I’d say that you need to be careful of falling into the problem of system novels of making the protagonist to powerful to quickly to the point where there is no challenge for them or what challenges do appear seem clunky and forced.

Honestly it’s a breath of fresh air for the app. I agree with the other when I say it’s a got a great story honestly I’d be happy to buy it off the shelf at any book store.

It’s the same for me I love it. Please keep writing it.

I love how his story actually has depth and most of the key character don't fell like there forgotten about. plus I mean it's based of MTG so of course it's getting my seal fo approval.

honestly one of my favourite modern family fan fics to date.

i love it, please pick it back up. give me more, give me more, give me more

honestly not a bad book, moves alittle slow but the world building is really good so it kinda makes up for that all in all a good read so far I am diffiently gonna recommend it.