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OverturningSeas

OverturningSeas

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I love reading and I love face-smacking cultivation novels the best. Anyways not to go on too long pm me if you're interested for a chat. XD

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas3mth
    Replied to Ryo_Toujo

    That means a lot for me. I'm currently on hiatus due to real life stuff. I hope you'll still be there when I come back.

    Ch 38 The Stage is Set (ii)
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    So far I liked the way the story is slowly building up. The slow encroaching of the elements of the demons and how the world around them all is slowly changing. All of that is well done and well thought out. The writing is also pretty good and engaging. I'm intrigued enough to know what happens next. As a person interested in the demons and angels and all that lies in between, and not finding a good book dealing with them, this was an excellent read for what it was.

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    Just a thought. Maybe instead of recognizing the sigil, it might be better if when he saw the sigil, the meaning of it was made apparent in his mind. I think that would make more sense than an entire town of demonology experts.

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    How obessessed was the dude with demonology though. Correct me if I'm wrong but aren't the symbols of enoch more for the names of the demons rather than the seven deadly sins. That's cos the seven deadly sins were made by the church and not mentioned at all in the book of Goethia

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  • OverturningSeas
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    And this is where I commend the public safety of your world. Damn son! In my place the cops would take at the very least 15-20 min and that too if the phone operator understood the mess correctly.

    The police arrived in just under 5 minutes. The lead investigator in charge took Xena out of the house for questioning whilst his team looked around the house.
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Commented

    'Died' - maybe you mean Dyed

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Commented

    I like the 'pull' word here. it's like he's in a gacha game and he's just waiting to pull that SSR waifu

    "How do you not have a girlfriend yet? You could pull literally any girl!"
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Posted

    The point off is for some of the puntuation errors and grammar stuff. Other than that for me this was a plain old nostalgia trip, Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z were my childhood. So it was fun meeting those characters once more in those situations. The ideas of this novel are rather well thought out and the characters are interesting as well. Give it a read if you like DBZ. That's my recommendation

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    "Well... I don't need you!", Nico yelled back at Natsumi. He was Betrayed he trusted her and she lied straight to his face, He was mad beyond belief but he still loved his mother but in his eyes right now she was a lier and couldn't be trusted, "I'm gonna leave don't follow me…", Nico walked out the door with his fathers outfit and slammed the door.
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    Nice though

    Today was Nico's First day at the Academy to join the Time Patrol. He was the only human there. Nico walked in and saw all sorts of races. There were Majjin's, Namekians, Sayians, and Frost demons. He was nervous and understandably so he was the only human there and compared to everyone's power given at birth he was lacking. But what he was lacking in strength he made up for in Technique. He got seated next to a Saiyan girl all of the other Saiyan's were looking at. Nico looked down at the desk and saw her name. It was Samantha and she looked beautiful. That's when the old kai came into the room and introduced us to our teacher.
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Commented

    Way to self - insert, my dude.

    Today was Nico's First day at the Academy to join the Time Patrol. He was the only human there. Nico walked in and saw all sorts of races. There were Majjin's, Namekians, Sayians, and Frost demons. He was nervous and understandably so he was the only human there and compared to everyone's power given at birth he was lacking. But what he was lacking in strength he made up for in Technique. He got seated next to a Saiyan girl all of the other Saiyan's were looking at. Nico looked down at the desk and saw her name. It was Samantha and she looked beautiful. That's when the old kai came into the room and introduced us to our teacher.
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Commented

    not much of that knowledge either. as you may have realized he was a bit of a muscle head previously. he's learning to be a scholar not an innate scholar. does that help?

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Replied to Orion5455

    Will try to.

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Posted

    I really liked the set-up of the world. Now while the synopsis has suggested a little of how the world works, in actuality, it's much more interesting and humorous. Will suggest for those who like urban novels like return of the immortal cultivator and strongest abandoned son. While different from the above this novel is good enough to get there.

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  • OverturningSeas
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    So I was hooked from the start. The story's witty, the characters are funny and quirky. I would sum up my experiences in a simple way. If you like funny rom-coms then this is a good novel to get into.

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
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    Though I didn't explicitly mention it, its more like their cultivation was high enough with all four of them to entirely suppress most of his inner qi. Hope that helps

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas4mth
    Replied to Orion5455

    You'll know soon. Thank you for the comment.

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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas5mth
    Commented

    maybe capitalize the Arguments and Conjourers to make it evident that these are not the usual 'arguments' for added clarity

    Now, let's say there are two scenarios, first one is that one of the arguments is not that capable and one of the conjurers is a capable one.
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  • OverturningSeas
    OverturningSeas5mth
    Commented

    I like the newest chapter. Makes much more sense now and has a lot more clarity

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  • OverturningSeas
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    Technological Prodigy? Maybe technology prodigal?

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