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Kinoro

Kinoro

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Just a man, fascinated with the imagination of the talented writers overseas. If you would like to help support me check out my Patreon :) https://www.patreon.com/Kinoro

2017-07-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro7mth
    Posted

    a strong entry to broaden the universe the author is building. I truly look forward to any future works. Good job, and thanks for the time well spent on reading.

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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro7mth
    Commented

    this reminds me of what heavens looks like in litow

    After realizing that his body was no longer confined to the rules of Aterium, he expanded it.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro8mth
    Replied to Flick_Lick

    I wonder if this could be Gravis' killing intent?

    The Abomination King's blank expression didn't change as it looked at Shang.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro8mth
    Replied to Shadow_Wolf_7251

    made the same comment a while back lol

    Just like Abomination Lords, the Abomination King was covered in completely black scales, and it had two velociraptor legs. Its tail was long and muscular, and it had six muscular arms that ended in five fingers with long and sharp claws. Its waist was thin, but its chest was wide and muscular.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro10mth
    Commented

    to be honest, I ddont see why all the hate on it. The guy isnt going to start out as Johny Sins. The carrot and stick method is usually a good one when trying to get drastic changes fast. Is having a consequence such a bad thing narrative wise?

    FAILURE: LOSE A RANDOM ENHANCEMENT ]
    altalt
    Pornstar System
    Urban · demon_king69
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro10mth
    Replied to ParagonDaoOfBS

    part of me wonders if this is inside a certain main characters self created universe while he was preparing to fight heaven

    The Lightning Emperor also nodded. "We Emperors are pretty sure that the level six Concept of Death represents the end of life for an entire world. Every human, beast, plant, or whatever would die, creating a world filled with Death Mana with no Life Mana in sight."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro10mth
    Commented

    Going to need to concept of freedom for that one maybe? lol

    "Naturally, the level six Concept of Life should represent the transformation of a dead world into a living world, and since our world isn't dead, you also can't comprehend this Concept."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro10mth
    Commented

    concept of "Dead World" very familiar lol. With no other world (that we know of) to ascend to to learn it either.

    The Lightning Emperor also nodded. "We Emperors are pretty sure that the level six Concept of Death represents the end of life for an entire world. Every human, beast, plant, or whatever would die, creating a world filled with Death Mana with no Life Mana in sight."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented
    Like, do some pushups.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Replied to Horunte

    actually burst out laughing at this lol

    The Kred raised his other hand to stop the boy, but Luke kicked him again and made him lose sight of the incoming attack. George successfully stabbed the alien, and Khan's attack followed.
    altalt
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    getting flashbacks to lightning is the only way with the heavens cosmos lol

    The Lightning Emperor nodded. "The same thing is true when you dig down or fly up. At some point, the reflective silver wall appears, and you can't continue."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Replied to captainawesome

    what if this situation was destined to happen thus showing the oracle at the time the vision knowing it would be spread out and disseminated? if whoever is the driving force behind the prophecies planned for this situation to happen then its not about it not happening yet. it was always supposed to, everyone is a pawn of the chessboard of fate including those who seemed to have mastered it.

    She left me to save herself? Was she really that selfish and cowardly? All because of a stupid prophecy?
    altalt
    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    show not showed

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    altalt
    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    After *all* rules

    After rules are meant to oppress the weak, Don't they? At least for the protagonist, it's like that.
    altalt
    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    or once i *make* a call

    "I know the person inside, Let me go in or once I made a call, You will regret it."
    altalt
    Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.
    Urban · ForManaga
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    I wonder if he will be using an alias going forward? Or will he only be able to use Shang?

    "But I am not Shang."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Replied to Maverick11

    and he was still used as nothing more than a plaything by the god. Shang is attempting and untraveled path to power, his mindset was established after his first bout of training finished.

    "I have abandoned everything just so I may gain a shot at Godhood."
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro1yr
    Commented

    I honestly agree. This is honestly one of the best pieces of writing and story development I have seen.

    Living a life without being able to become more powerful sounded like leading an existence worse than death to him.
    altalt
    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro2yr
    Replied to Daoist116880

    smiley friends

    The boxes looked like graphical distortions, like glitches in the game, and when they faded away, it was not a beautiful, golden haired and golden eyed goddess that stared back at him, but a pixelated black stick figure.
    altalt
    Super Necromancer System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • Kinoro
    Kinoro2yr
    Commented
    The boxes looked like graphical distortions, like glitches in the game, and when they faded away, it was not a beautiful, golden haired and golden eyed goddess that stared back at him, but a pixelated black stick figure.
    altalt
    Super Necromancer System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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