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dude, are u really out of idea by going back to previous chapter again?
the pace is to slow, so far u're using repetitive sentences on one chapter to describe situation/mc emotional condition/etc... before the S-day the mc just playing "S&M" to whoever bitch he see, when he should be prepraring himself to get stronger faster, i think he's not wise enough for 1000y old man who get back stabed by people close to him on the second maybe last chance that he got. sorry dude i just said whatever in mind...