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Erobyss1yrCommentedAt the beginning your father/uncle put massive debt on you and we’re doing business to make money but now you stealing from a city which protects 1000s of people for your own selfish greed. Your character is far worse than the bearded man you took revenge on. Absolute trash character.
A few minutes later, Tang Zhen put these runestones into his storage space. He had already gathered all the materials needed to build the city Tower and could build it at any time.- Erobyss1yrCommented
It states you haven’t seen your mom in 7 years in an earlier line. Also she doesn’t die for four years and you only went back 7 years doesn’t that mean that you just ignored her existence for 4 years. If your character died at 32 that would make more sense because that would be 7 years after her death. Otherwise this makes your character look uncaring and unloving.
Reincarnating to 1st Jan 2100..... Now 21 ....Fate gave him the chance to change his destiny . - Erobyss1yrCommentedCh 1215 Sometimes, Science Is More Than Just an Idea
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Because the author didn’t manage the month properly he lacks time to finish the mission with in the month. FIrst day at seekers guild learns hunters exam is 2 weeks off, so he hustles 1 day to b rank, 3 days in kunlun mountains, 3 days prepping and dealing with one shadow, then message and meeting with seekers guild, then 3 week prep training arc, when there should be only 1 week and 2 days since you skip the first exam. So instead of being able to open the shop and finish the quest he should fail due to authors lack of time management
Ch 397 Chapter 397: Before the exam - Erobyss2yrCommented
Question he was given 1 month to open pet shop, first day up to b rank, next was a 3 day mission then 3 days to deal with one shadow now 3 weeks for the hunter exam I feel like that’s the whole month there, also at one point you said hunter exam was only 2 weeks off and that was his first day at the seekers guild. Someone seems to just toss numbers out without thinking of true ramifications.
During the next three weeks, Lin Fan didn't go out at all. He just locked himself in and focused purely on three things, training his pets, cultivating, and refining pills. - Erobyss2yrCommentedCh 51 Chapter 51 The New Record of Su Group's Stock
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Who is caroline and carolyn further down is she also princess loraine can there be some continuity or did your novel get chosen and now you dont care about Quality at all?
Caroline shrunk her neck, a little afraid. - Erobyss2yrCommentedCh 39 The Expansion Of Lont
- Erobyss2yrCommentedCh 165 Cautious with Words