i gave a scathing review to the villaness and i her zombie book by this author, but im willing to give this book the parise it deserves. its a really enjoyable read. good hearted MC, love the setting and so much potential. if i had to pick fault. I would say that the author makes the MC go through some torture that might be difficult to read through folks accuse the MC of being a simp and question why he was so obcessed with the female villaness.

fun fact: according to real life taoist, buddhist and hindu spiritual and esoteric practices- human men actually weaken from sex, while women do not

while were back to normal let me just criticize the last chapters for the retardedness. killing those soldiers were a waste of human resources and unnecessary. many philosophy books and some of war state that 1 should explain and educate first, then punish. the plot writings bad. Those soldiers reactions are way too tame for great warriors who've fought in war. Some of them were friends with the deceased soldiers and should develop hatred for the MC and complain to the church or valiantly stand up to him. the soldiers that cry or knelt should be humiliated and develop hatred for the MC and protest. overall I think the MC was a controlling Karen for this round

Calypso is also a music genre of Trinidad and tobago

so, it's the Christian God, referred to here?

dial back the opness of the system and the onesidedness in which the main character beats skye. arguably the system is stronger than whatever the skye has by too large a margin

Am alive, But people that should be close to me aren't. Yeah Im picking it back up.

Hold on, didnt the MC get adopted by the old grandma? Isnt the shrine his inheritance now?

its real

this argument weak af,like real white people in the suburbs kinda shit, is my guy lawrence not even going to curse back?

white pp knight

I cant help but feel you turned him into a whitec0ck knight here. You dont know why he's screaming at her but...here's OP with a big pp energy

lmao

So a waiter? Love how she fakes him out here

Shameless 5 stars from the author. Fellas here me when I say this, I would rather not release a chapter that to release one with errors. I absolutely will see this story to completion, I wont drop this unless I die from the great Bat infection of 2020. Please do comment and review my work and chapters. If you're going to give criticism, make sure that when you cuss me out, make sure that there is some actual words of wisdom there for me.

the story is actually quite promising and updates are stable with a single exception. Every Female in this story, whom the author bothered to give character development was handcrafted, for the MC to ****. Every man in this story is a bad guy for the MC to cuck. The MC is also a huge simp. For a guy who has lived 700+ lives, he sure does seem needy for ***. His character development is trash.

I want to make a person verbal attac on the author for going this route.

Senbonsakura