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JimmyJackJim

JimmyJackJim

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Hi I am Jack .......,........ duh

2017-10-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    bruh!

    Later, the Devil Supreme fell in love with Su Yier, giving her the magic treasures refined by her two junior sisters.
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    he can do basic math now

    Cunning: 20
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    beat the kid when adult isn't there , and threat that if he snitch(at any time or any where) with his clone, he will get beaten again.

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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    kill him and take his power for 1 of your clone

    Li Fang had a smile on his face, but Ling Feng could feel his malice towards him. He couldn't help but feel a little puzzled. 'I haven't even done anything yet, why are you targeting me?'
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    bloody tactical genius

    "Continue to kill!"
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    so he can stay at home to meditate and let the clone do info gather and part time job

    "As for those students below A-rank, I won't make such a recommendation because it's really difficult. Also, you don't have to come to school anymore.
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    bruh,these power is random or through bloodline, how teaching gonna affect the power before they manifest? let alone taking credit for it.

    "Other than these two students, look at your talents. What do you all have? He's the worst student I've ever taught!"
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    is this translation error, weird writing style or plain randomness that writer wrote at 3 am?

    But no matter what, Ling Feng was a time traveler. He had worked so hard to travel to this world and even had the golden finger of the system. In the end, he was only a subordinate that received that meager monthly salary. Wouldn't the great time travelers laugh at him?
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    The Whole World Awakened: My Clones Are Everywhere
    Urban · Urban Cloning Power
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    imagine hug someone then active this and negative burst continously

    Instantly cause critical damage to any target touched with your hands.
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    RE:BORN Zombie
    Fantasy · Killix_Kreed
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    I wonder if he remove his teeth and stab people with it ,will it still inflict status effect

    [Rot Bite]
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    RE:BORN Zombie
    Fantasy · Killix_Kreed
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    the more i read this novel the more I want to play a game like this to find out which path i can take and evolved, not necessarily need to be ant

    Skill points: 57
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim1yr
    Commented

    so in the future, a warning gonna pop off for 1 second "you gonna get sent to the shadow wealm Jimbo" before you get dragged into the deep abbys

    In truth, she'd felt more than a little embarrassed at being abducted from her home when trying to get some extra paperwork done. She'd been operating on five hours of sleep a night for weeks up to that point. If they were going to grab anyone, it was almost certainly going to be her. A warning would have been nice though! She doubted that Anthony had to put up with this sort of treatment within the Colony.
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Commented

    congratulations, it a sentient Black hole

    At this point, it's as if the spell takes over, the flow of mana from my gravitational gland increasing from a steady flow to an outpour that threatens to outpace my minds as the greedy ball sucks in everything it can whilst my minds combine to hold it desperately together. What the heck is this!? Does the spell have a mind of its own!
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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Posted

    for my personal take on it, I would say this is a great find to keep,the personality of many isn't just 2d just for show,they all have some sort of motive, with "plot power " doesn't always appear and the story is very "colorful", in my eyes this is a great simple novel that doesn't confuse people who maybe new to the genre but still deliver some of great writing

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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Posted

    for my perspective of this novel, I would say this is a great piece to find and collect to your collection, with it writing, story development, character design and world background fully mastered. From no to little flaw make the experience and enjoyment any less, it will keep us on our toe and wish for more. despite not fully read the novel I would say this should be a standard for other work's aims to reach or higher. But again, it is only my personal opinion

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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Replied to Arthur_Leywin_6067

    so far, no

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Posted

    I will say this is the few novels out there that is great to read it, from how thee world building mixed with the power and how the side characters also have personality instead of just there for body count

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Posted

    for those who wish to truly know what it about depend on my thought(do note I only read up to the free trial so far) . -The writing is very lacking but they do hold some interesting concept,but good idea with bad execution still make a bad story. - there is time when information get repeated for words count or treat reader as brain dead , -then sudden world building that doesn't have clear explain of how we know it ,the information just pop up and want us to go with the flow. -few character have introduction but bear no significance to the story, just like how we meet real new people to have a few talk to them then never meet each other again or gain anything from it, it doesn't change anything beside wasting time. -the power is decently new and interesting but how it get used isn't as interesting, -the user reincarnated from modern time but the dude don't know how his system work ,might as well make him a normal ancient dude with a system, -the passive he gain is a bit heavy plot Armour to my liking -time skip when you don't want to have time skip - I notice it say it non clique and it true but to me it feel like the story Just. try write out and be " ooh ohh am I gonna be clique? am i? "then write something opposite in the end

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    I Cultivate Passively
    Eastern · Bloodied White Shirt
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Commented

    so the drawing quality bar just gonna turn into a "massive power gain plot" after a time skip

    "Oh right! I should be able to draw passive skills now!"
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    I Cultivate Passively
    Eastern · Bloodied White Shirt
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  • JimmyJackJim
    JimmyJackJim2yr
    Commented

    the aspect of information need higher cultivation to understand but he need to reach it to understand. his cultivation is to low to acquire that aspect of information. the aspect of information that require higher cultivation but he doesn't have high enough cultivation. the cultivation require for the aspect of the information need to be higher that the cultivation that he have now . if now he have higher cultivation then he may learn the aspect of the information

    He had yet to be able to come into contact with this aspect of information.
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    I Cultivate Passively
    Eastern · Bloodied White Shirt
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