JimmyJackJim
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beat the kid when adult isn't there , and threat that if he snitch(at any time or any where) with his clone, he will get beaten again.
kill him and take his power for 1 of your clone
bloody tactical genius
so he can stay at home to meditate and let the clone do info gather and part time job
bruh,these power is random or through bloodline, how teaching gonna affect the power before they manifest? let alone taking credit for it.
is this translation error, weird writing style or plain randomness that writer wrote at 3 am?
imagine hug someone then active this and negative burst continously
I wonder if he remove his teeth and stab people with it ,will it still inflict status effect
the more i read this novel the more I want to play a game like this to find out which path i can take and evolved, not necessarily need to be ant
so in the future, a warning gonna pop off for 1 second "you gonna get sent to the shadow wealm Jimbo" before you get dragged into the deep abbys
congratulations, it a sentient Black hole
for my personal take on it, I would say this is a great find to keep,the personality of many isn't just 2d just for show,they all have some sort of motive, with "plot power " doesn't always appear and the story is very "colorful", in my eyes this is a great simple novel that doesn't confuse people who maybe new to the genre but still deliver some of great writing
for my perspective of this novel, I would say this is a great piece to find and collect to your collection, with it writing, story development, character design and world background fully mastered. From no to little flaw make the experience and enjoyment any less, it will keep us on our toe and wish for more. despite not fully read the novel I would say this should be a standard for other work's aims to reach or higher. But again, it is only my personal opinion
for those who wish to truly know what it about depend on my thought(do note I only read up to the free trial so far) . -The writing is very lacking but they do hold some interesting concept,but good idea with bad execution still make a bad story. - there is time when information get repeated for words count or treat reader as brain dead , -then sudden world building that doesn't have clear explain of how we know it ,the information just pop up and want us to go with the flow. -few character have introduction but bear no significance to the story, just like how we meet real new people to have a few talk to them then never meet each other again or gain anything from it, it doesn't change anything beside wasting time. -the power is decently new and interesting but how it get used isn't as interesting, -the user reincarnated from modern time but the dude don't know how his system work ,might as well make him a normal ancient dude with a system, -the passive he gain is a bit heavy plot Armour to my liking -time skip when you don't want to have time skip - I notice it say it non clique and it true but to me it feel like the story Just. try write out and be " ooh ohh am I gonna be clique? am i? "then write something opposite in the end
so the drawing quality bar just gonna turn into a "massive power gain plot" after a time skip
the aspect of information need higher cultivation to understand but he need to reach it to understand. his cultivation is to low to acquire that aspect of information. the aspect of information that require higher cultivation but he doesn't have high enough cultivation. the cultivation require for the aspect of the information need to be higher that the cultivation that he have now . if now he have higher cultivation then he may learn the aspect of the information