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Yuekain1yrCommentedWedding? was it not a birthday?
"I'm afraid you won't have a good experience attending the canbell family's wedding at this time," Edwin tactfully reminded.detailAfter Her Engagement Annulled, the Weak Rich Daughter Becomes a Big Shot!General · Mountain Spring- Yuekain1yrCommented
Alexandra?
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I watched it with much relish. It was very exiting and I will watch it again. It's so much that one can learn from it ( and it's just a show )
"You must have seen this method used in thrillers and shows like the Mentalist. It is a matter of body-language and was one of the tells written in a lot of interrogation manuals. While it is not a science, this has more to do with the gut than anything," Sebastian interjected. - Yuekain1yrCommented
really? if it's just another soft petting I will be very angry 😤
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oh please let it be what I am thinking about 🥹🫣
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He touched her cheek and ...
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on her soft
He greedily nibbled on his soft and sweet red lips. His blue pupils had turned dark blue. Jiang Zhi's heart suddenly shrank under his gaze, and a strange numbness spread wildly from her tailbone. - Yuekain2yrCommented
I am tired to tired to correct everything. I don't even know if you appreciate my efforts.
Actually, Grandpa Tang respected Long Hui very much. However, when turned to his beloved granddaughter, he was really more be careful about selecting the man for his granddaughter. - Yuekain2yrCommented
😭 You used it two times right and when you do what? You mix everything up again. his and her How about looking it up online if you don't know what to use.
The thing made him worried about his granddaughter was the man beside her granddaughter. Many questions appeared in his mind. What made him love her granddaughter? Was he truly sincere with her granddaughter? Can he protect her? - Yuekain2yrCommented
second sentence her grandfather not his Yu Qi is a woman so it is her something. I saw this mistake several times. Yes it is Grandpa's bown. (his bowl) But you don't refer to the bowl but to her grandfather.
The dinner started. Yu Qi put some meat into his grandfather bowl. Grandpa Tang looked at the bowl and smiled gently to his granddaughter and turned to Long Hui while smiling provoking Lon Hui. - Yuekain2yrCommented
went blushing? another mistake Do you have a proofreader? If yes than fire him/her. I really like the story you tell us but I am struggling with the many mistakes and I don't know if this is the quality one gets whether I spend my money right. English I not my main language and I know how one struggles to get everything right when writing. It's human that mistakes happen but not in every second sentence. If you have difficulty writing right then get someone to read it before you post it. Really get help.
Long Hui was smiling when he heard that sentence. Yu Qi automatically went blushing. - Yuekain2yrCommented
That cold expression is one thing that I like. please don't mix the present and past in one sentence
"That cold expression was one thing that I like." Yu Qi said without thinking. She forgot that Long Hui could hear her answer. When she realized that, Yu Qi turned to Long Hui slowly. - Yuekain2yrCommented
What do you see in him? please correct your mistakes I stumble over them and it diminish's the reading experience
"What do you can see from him? He did not have anything except for that cold expression." Grandpa Tang rolled his eyes. - Yuekain2yrCommented
Shouldn't it be 'good and bad' one's
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he lied to the teacher about being ill
Su Yang said, "Then, I can't do anything. I never lie." - Yuekain3yrCommented
me too I am like Zorro and don't even understand any map 😅
Tang Li Xue's card number was 3211627. It means her room was on the 32nd floor, 11th area, room number 627. - Yuekain3yrCommented
wasn't Dai Xue the on with an empire of ***toys? And not 'normal' on bit BDSM ***toys. Yeah he ist ssssssooooooo normal 😅
Hearing that narcissist and conceited words of Qing Ye, Tao Xin can only roll his eyes exasperatedly while inwardly questioning the taste of his loner friend which is making him so glad that Dai Xue isn't a weird one at all.