Tian_Long_Xiu
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Tian_Long_Xiu7mthPostedWhat a good find. I 'm quite suprise of the unexpected plot development, a hard one to pull off. I hope you can maintain the pacing and plot progression of the story. I think you really need to edit the some chapters at the start. There are some errors in writing that I think you can change for better reading experience. The character development is quiite fast, but it become better. Thank you for the stroy. Hoping for more chapters to come.
- Tian_Long_Xiu8mthCommentedCh 28 Wei Chen's choice
- Tian_Long_Xiu8mthCommentedCh 27 Wei Chen and his grandfather
- Tian_Long_Xiu8mthCommentedCh 26 shopping
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 25 ingraving spells
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 24 Divine sense and sea of consciousness
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 23 military competition
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 22 Returning
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 21 progress report
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 20 True Purpose Of Body Training
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 19 Prelude Of The Devil Instructor
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 18 Wei Chen grandfather
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 16 Cure, Knowledge and New Dungeons
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 17 Anxious Wei Chen
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 17 Anxious Wei Chen
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 16 Progress An Huge Battle
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 15 Preparations and yang god method
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 14 Wei Chen visiting
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 13 6th of qi refining and collection of elemental spell
- Tian_Long_Xiu9mthCommentedCh 12 Spear visit