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rb4ever11mthReplied to APHELIOUSi have another suggestion try to remove the word 'some' it remains correct and doesn't sound weird. also i would suggest not writing 'etc' however write 'and much more' this is my opinion. I do like your writing style for now. keep up the good work.
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spam aoe on his own location and all enemies are dead.. if his regen is high enough.
It was indeed a piece of god-tier equipment, and it was even level-free. It was something that could evolve twice more in the future too. No wonder this NPC mission was so popular in his previous life. It was not without reason. - rb4ever2yrReplied to Zenfree
however imagine a mage spamming some aoe and he doesn't need to hide but can tank all the hits. this is a warmachine..
In his previous life, he was a level 200 Demigod Berserker. He was very familiar with the path of Warrior Apprentices, so there was no need for him to make any changes. - rb4ever2yrCommented
nobody corrected this?
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am I the only one to notice that the author wrote:resignation office and not registration office?
This chapter has been deleted. - rb4ever2yrReplied to Fly_you_fools
you don't have to write hundred it is confusing and just not needed. 999 is nine hundred ninety nine so no need to say nine hundred ninety nine hundred.
[Hollows: 1 hundred to 999 hundred points] - rb4ever2yrReplied to Azure_warrior
i think you meant itsuki talking to finn
"I don't hear such words from someone who just lost against me." Finn said with a smile. - rb4ever2yrReplied to Pinguinmonster
if i remember correctly it was a 'tutor' hired by chichi.
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4stats × 2k per =8k total bp 20k BP - 8k BP =12k BP 12k BP + 3k luck is 15k BP or am i missing something?
After that, the rest of the available BP were assigned to LUC, increasing it to 18,000 points. - rb4ever2yrReplied to Xanderix
i think he meant something like: i felt someone talking about me, then remembered that I wrote a message on a sign for ash.
I suddenly somebody saying saying about as I recalled my calligraphy on direction board for Ash - rb4ever2yrCommented
write it on a piece of paper then do a mass release
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MAMAAA ooohoohooh~ didn't mean to make you cry~
Easy come easy go. - rb4ever2yrReplied to IsekaiDChaser
imagine reading a 'chapter' with previous chapter included.. you should only read the last chapter to read the book.
~The next day~ - rb4ever2yrReplied to isarule_kalemer
haha same time only am here (^.^)
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'Do you know how to extract fresh water from for example urine?' this would be a better sentence.
"Do how freshwater of various liquids like urine?" - rb4ever2yrReplied to Akechi
haha, I had the problem with names. It was already the last month of the schoolyear and we had a last test before the exams. This time the test was long and important and thus the teacher told us to write everything correctly. I left her name blank. After finishing the test when she was skimming through them she saw that i didn't write her name and asked me about it. My answer was I couldn't remember your name and it was a test so I couldn't ask. everyone was laughing.
Because of this, he always looked at everything with a bored face. From the start to the end of his education, he just got by with average scores. As soon as a specific knowledge wasn't necessary, he would forget it as if he had never learned it in the first place. - rb4ever2yrCommented
registrating*
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0.16cm is 1.6mm 1cm is 10mm
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great power comes with great responsibility. or with great power comes great responsibility.
"Okay I'll train this Rattata to be able to take down that Dratini for free, You just need to be a good kid and protect the students from their bullies remember there is a saying that with great power comes with great responsibility." Joseph patted the head of the heroic kid. Joseph doesn't mind helping Timmy because he's doing it for good reason and he will just train Timmy's pokemon to the level that he can easily take down the bullies and protect the poor students.