rb4ever

i have another suggestion try to remove the word 'some' it remains correct and doesn't sound weird. also i would suggest not writing 'etc' however write 'and much more' this is my opinion. I do like your writing style for now. keep up the good work.

spam aoe on his own location and all enemies are dead.. if his regen is high enough.

however imagine a mage spamming some aoe and he doesn't need to hide but can tank all the hits. this is a warmachine..

nobody corrected this?

am I the only one to notice that the author wrote:resignation office and not registration office?

you don't have to write hundred it is confusing and just not needed. 999 is nine hundred ninety nine so no need to say nine hundred ninety nine hundred.

i think you meant itsuki talking to finn

if i remember correctly it was a 'tutor' hired by chichi.

4stats × 2k per =8k total bp 20k BP - 8k BP =12k BP 12k BP + 3k luck is 15k BP or am i missing something?

i think he meant something like: i felt someone talking about me, then remembered that I wrote a message on a sign for ash.