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Dende came to earth before the cell games
there a lot of ai for grammar nowadays. try using one, if you want. I like the story [img=recommend]
Touki was a knowledge of the fight with sairaorg that he had watched. But I can understand your point of view too. I did not have some plan for the story honestly. I just put what came on my mind daily
Mc is pretty much ignorant on the future events of the story. The most important reason is that he himself was toyed around by supernaturals. He was moved more by the heart than the brain
No need for issei since most of the ORC members are stronger. I mean, Akeno can use Kirin. So he did not save Rias. Did not manage to kiss with her. no powerup. Not enough power for a balance breaker. In the end Kokabiel killed him.
ki accumulation core creation eight meridians golden core nascent soul if I must put some sort of level to the cultivation.
something like the holy swords affinity?
This is what I was trying to convey too. I wanted to emphasize that he fears more emotional pain( like losing his family etc) than that of his body. I asked because many seemed disgusted by the process, but to me it seemed the most logical process since he has not studied artificial sacred gear forging. Maybe I could make the artifacts limited. Like they get destroyed after 1 or 2 uses because the material was not enough strong?
Is it a problem that he is using his body as forging materials? Should I change that too?
More than completely controlling the law, he is slowly learning it. He is mastering it slowly. Just like Kuroka in a way. For the artifact, I think I'll just change the later chapters. You could imagine he is still at a low percentage of law integration. Still not an authority.
In traditional Chinese culture, qi, also ki or ch'i. just synonyms
there is no gender to any of them
just a little break. I did not drop it. I was thinking of remaking or creating something in a story in which he becomes apathetic to everything after his master's death. Just I have too many things to do during this time, so I needed a little break.
touki life force. ki energy transformed using the outside ki into the dantian
Are not the sacred gear created by the system God built? Then how are the sacred gear able to have such a variety of powers. I then guessed that the authority of the biblical God must have imprinted into the sacred gears. Or they have some being sealed inside and can tap into their authority. Since the sacred gear can grow stronger influenced by the will of the user, isn't it right to say that the soul power it's an important part of the process. Now the protagonist has some access to the law but has still not mastered them. Since he has not mastered them, then he needs some sort of reagent to help him imprint a connection to the authority he has access. His blood and bones are very compatible with his soul power obviously. I did put some logic toward the artifact creation.
still not in love with her though. irreplaceable friend.