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Azcret2yrReplied to SupesHe means this one is waaayyy better, and honestly i understand him, DC just ain't ready for a good fanfic. You have done a very good work for this one Author but the other one is hmmm... In blunt words not a good one both in plot and character but most of all immersion and connectivity with the reader.
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Brilliant!
"I know, I've even got the right initals. Sirius Orion Black, also known as Son Of a Bitch." - Azcret2yrReplied to AnteChao
there is no try when you ask someone to abandon their engagement for someone not worth it and let's face it the MC is scum for treating every woman like that, and a straight down loser for knowing that and don't even bother changing it and yet having the gull to ask others to give him a chance, when chances are won and not given.
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another author that thinks and writes with his lower part. why don't you describe from the start in the synopsis that you just want slaves for your harem and that's it's just for your self wish-fulfilling and not just a story for a good read.
My training has come pretty far away from the time I had just started. I am still doing the Saitama exercise though however, I have made new abilities for me to grow even more powerful. There were even some abilities that would help my crew in their training like the teaching skill. It would let me teach someone any skills without wasting too much of my time. I gave one of my skills to her as well which was a downgraded version of Super Growth. I wanted her to grow but not to the level of mine. It was just a safety precaution. I would only give this skill to my future girls though not all of them. I would never tell them that I have given them skills otherwise they might tell it to someone else. I would though make them loyal to me. - Azcret3yrCommented
hell no!
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you did good! I actually feel like you filled an actual manga plot hole that always bugged me.
I doubt a ship like that of the Rocks Crew would remain standing with just Adam's Wood. After all they literally fought each other to the point of death for fun. So I added something to change it a bit. - Azcret3yrCommented
+1
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So? what wrong with that? I seriously want to hear your opinion.
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the minimum I would consider someone as a god would be universe creation and not some measly planets...
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they want to be drama queens... with a lot of tears xD
Three weeks have passed since Yuuji arrived at this world. Yuuji knew that only a few days are left till 'they' will start appearing. - Azcret3yrCommented
you ignorant baboon how dare you!! Shity wind element is garbage (really just magic cuz that's how you use it in your idiotic scum mind) in front of spirit( divine)sense the fucking first step towards omnipresence. you are in a cultivation world where you can reach a stage that can destroy and create universes and above! and you just play the little punny wizard with shity eyes, from a place that only have wanna be chakra gods, NOT REALL GODS!!!!!!
He closed the screen and realized that Qingyue has already left the place, he sensed her in Xia manor by using wind element, his control over wind element allows him to sense the location of anyone he wants in a certain area. - Azcret3yrCommented
HELL YEAH!!!!!
So you will not read that in this fic. - Azcret3yrCommented
sorry for the offense but are you an idiot? at that time she was living in Alabasta, which is a fucking desert country and you expect her to have milky white skin with all that sun? don't throw stupid theories like 90s sketch and that bullshit.
She tasted amazing. Like honey, and the feeling of her breasts against my chest was heavenly. She's not fully developed like after the time-skip but she's getting there. Also another strange thing, her skin tone resembles that of her after time-skip self, and not the dark tone from when she first appeared in the series. - Azcret3yrCommented
ok, don't push you are first. Btw author I really like your story! good job! and a bit of advice change your story cover so those mindless and horny sheep on this site may find your fic, cuz it deserves more attention. (even though, I don't know if it will be for better or worse)
Ch 26 Start of the trip - Azcret3yrReplied to NoWayRageCh 24 Chapter 24
- Azcret3yrReplied to Vostarian
Like it. Good job! I prefer an OC for a love interest.
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+3
Whitebeard Team- Whitebeard, Beerus, Whis, Ace, Marco. - Azcret3yrCommented
Well, the actor that played Dubls in the first two movies died, and then another continued the role till the end.
Cross looked over and frowned deeply, Dumbledore looked a lot younger. This wasn't normal. Cross looked at Dumbledore deeply, Dumbledore turned his head to him and his eyes twinkled. Cross' eyes went back to curious and nervous as he smiled dumbly, Dumbledore turned back to everyone else and kept speaking. - Azcret3yrReplied to Traps_Are_Gay
hehehe you never heard of Arthur Shelby. :)
"We are fooked, most of the Crownland lords have pledged for the Targaryen boy, we will soon have ninety thousands men outside these walls ready to take this city, that's not mentioning the ships that are blocking us, and dragons, what are we going to do about motherfooking dragons"