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besides the name and the "speech" part no idea what the rest means or is supposed to be?
it should be Asgard right now Olymplus?
it wasn't specifically stated she was, it was stated she was acting strange but there wasn't enough of a reason to explain why she acted strange, she could of just been nervous around him because she secretly liked him and couldn't balance the emotions with the responsibility of being his maid
it's a little overkill with killing the maid who is 14 years old I get its unintended consequence but the way it is explained is a little callous even if she "was" part of the reason for the original body dying it's not like he regained memories proving she was part of it to justify lack of concern
where did the Ant come from? thought he had a bear cub
so far it's good though i wish he was a lil less harsher I get the whole being betrayed and wanting to change his future but he could be a lil kinder in his actions and interactions with minor characters he is after all a ***** in a 6yr olds body adults aren't always right in their actions and he is after all mostly interacting with kids for the most part overall it's good and I'm behind as I just found this story today