XueYing0132

Just a minor correction. The name is Justin Finch-Fletchley.

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Again, wasn't the Kusanagi?

Wasn't the name Kusanagi?

The man's description reminds me of Jack the Ripper from the Record of Ragnarok anime.

This case is more a matter of regression than time travel, in my opinion.

Harris and Hill haven't been introduced yet.

Say it out loud. Don't just think it.

So far, I've noticed enough inconsistencies often in the same chapter, merely a few paragraphs apart, for me to keep quiet. Earlier, he sold all his belongings for $2000 and paid $10000 to be smuggled, which doesn't make sense. Then he was robbed of $1000 more. Then he somehow acquired a gun to threaten Stern, from where? I am also curious about where he acquired the funds for his meal and the clothes he would later wear. He also commented on the Hulk's hanging dong, while he should only have had a doctor's white coat from your earlier description, making his situation barely any better. Unless I missed something in that paragraph. Sorry for the long comment, but I got a bit frustrated.

I remember that in the first chapter, you described Nick as having green eyes. What changed?