Lol no see ya I've dropped your book homie too much drama tbh, but still wish ya blessings lol

Yeah dropped story nice try fishing but your purposely building drama and ending on cliffs to make ppl buy you patre on is obvious and painful to read. Patre on prob stilp ends on a cliff so the dont cancel lol. Good luck tho.

Yeah dropped story nice try fishing but your purposely building drama and ending on cliffs to make ppl buy you patre on is obvious and painful to read. Patre on prob stilp ends on a cliff so the dont cancel lol. Good luck tho.

Meh kinda stopped caring tbh been so long since it happened don't really hit the same. Rip

Man solid story but updates are so slow with these cliffhanger it ain't worth reading until you build up dozens of chapters.

Good story keep it up! Uh I just learned your Dao name an must ask will you be doin romance? Might not keep up with the story tbh but wanted to tell you good luck and keep it up one of the best intro to a poke fic. Might come by later an read again but not sure.

Thanks

Idk how to feel about this arc. Kinda meh tbh. Probably gonna just skim through feels like your forcing things here

Tyftc

Thanks for the chapter but imma start a petition to evolve my boy nido. Last to evolve ev3n tho he's the starter as well as a good boy. Shame to the author 😕 😢 😞

Thanks for the food. Keep it up. Tho if this encounter don't help change his mind set about training a bit then that be a shame. He hasn't need a reason to grow strong but to truly protect his farm and family he's gonna need to step it up lol.

Thanks for the food Kinda excited to see the next strat and the second pokemon. Or will it be just one gengar to rule them all

Thanks for the food

Wise men know to fear the shuckle...

I understand it was randomized but still doesn't change the fact that is a main premise of a fan fiction on this site. No shade just you said you wanted to be original. Granted you made time not pass in it so it's less useful but still. As for copying, not so much but the reborn as ash is over played in my opinion. Like I said good writing and will be enjoyable to thos fresh to the scene but kinda stale to an old timer like me. Now if instead you made him the son of geovanni and kinda became his own story would been drawing for me personally(could have gone through same cenarioes but feel more real, everyone has in their mind how ash should be from animes.. it like character swapping in movie not bad but jarring. Didn't mean to sound over critical hope you keep it up and sorry so long.

Thanks for your hard work

No grammar or spelling issues but... Basically a wanna be story of replacing ash and going through his adventures. Sucks because if he mad ash an o.c. and changed a bit more it would be more drawing, Wouldn't be bad but the author stated in the first chapter comments he wanted to be more original so he gave ash his own personal dimension...like another popular pokemon fan fiction 200 chap plus... on top of an unoriginal premise of going through as ash.... lame and unimaginative...

Wouldn't mind a harem or one other. After all they are all gonna be traveling and having other main priorities so would have other avenues open to write from. All and all write what makes you happy just enjoying the ride

Thanks for all your hard work. Don't t even have anything to pick on just a nice chill read. Please feed me Seamoore

Am I the only one depressed for nidorino? I mean sure your not strong enough to go to kount moon but could but one? Request it for a reward? Instead he watches on as he becomes the last to evolve and even axel was surprised that nido remember he promised... you even hav3 nidoking on the cover... sad sad.