This ending was my favorite of the two. People’s avoidance of writing a story where the MC dies in the end is a shame. (Not that we need hundreds) It made more sense that she wasn’t resurrected than when she was, and in my opinion, led to a more genuine and sincere conclusion to the story. Thanks for writing both endings though, and thanks for the story!

This is the greatest fanfiction I have read with under 100 chapters. While the fanfic was short, I don’t want to say it was rushed per se, it could have been longer but it successfully avoids the hallmark traits of being rushed. Excellent story, excellent execution, the flow is natural to read and keeps you engaged. While I won’t spoil the ending here, for the author if you are reading. I appreciate the alternative ending, however, the first ending was fabulous in many ways that I cannot fully express without spoilers. It was a great read, thank you for finishing it.

Love the fanfic by the way, keep it up

The third had iron sand, the forth had gold sand. It’s after the third war where the Forth spends time collecting gold to make up for deficits.

Keep going!

Summary says she is Anakin’s twin. You may want to fix the summary.

From what I understand, Tobirama couldn’t FTG things other than himself, for example, tailed beast bomb. Genuinely think that with my understanding of FTG Minato shouldn’t have even been able to do that, but I haven’t researched it. Minato was able to use FTG on weapons and Tobirama had to/ only used it on people/ places he marked. I believe Minato’s improvements had to do with the versatility of what could be marked, as well as what could be FTGed

Thanks for coming back with a new chapter!

Finally got Tsunade 😂

You’re back! Thanks for the chapters!

It’s been a while without our Disney princess Author san. I hope you are still writing, and that your classes are going well.

I completed understand your struggles, some mtl fanfics are so difficult to read I have stopped in the middle of the first chapter. Good job making this readable

Uzu was destroyed between the start of the second war and end of the third. When exactly isn’t specified, however given the material we do have, uzu was likely destroyed in between the second and third wars, which was a brief and very chaotic time as the second war only really stopped in name.

Cliff hangers… 😭

Extremely solid beginning to this story, usually it’s over in less than 10 or so chapters 😭 so I have been simultaneously relishing the robust beginning and greedily desiring his entry to school sooner. 😂 good work

I like it. I really want the secrets you keep teasing about her strength! Since at 3 she was able to knock out Kumo’s emissaries… makes me think of tenseigan but I don’t recall any genjutsu prowess from it.

… yup definitely didn’t need that key to commit timey wimey wibbly wobbly time shenanigans to save the world…

Lol, love it!

😂 don’t forget about your readers! Please continue, I like the fanfic!

Edit, recent chapters have been much better. I would rate this among your other works as a 4. On a side note, I must ask what did Dumbledore do to overcome Ron’s loss of house points? Not even Hermione would be able to keep up with Ron’s mouth. 😂