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Could you please maybe decrease the force usage? You have a really nice story here that you have been writing. It would really suck if you potentially ruin it to keep up with all the force bullshit of the main character. you are making him to overpowered for like no reason at all. Maybe change it to a mutation of increased awareness and faster healing? Otherwise keep up the good work.
Everybody this is a copy paste of anther person's story. The only thing that has been changed is the title to something just a little different. You can find the real story "Angry harry and the seven" on fanfiction.net