"Why the hell are there creatures here?" he shouted, but there was no one to answer him. All he knew that he was fighting against that archer, and winning, when a bunch of monsters suddenly leapt his way, throwing him off guard and landing a couple of heavy hits, depleting his hp.
The plot making is good, and the world that the author present to us has a lot of possibilities. But, and is a big fat BUT, keep changing material, names, and a lot of things in every new chapter, don't have a consistency along de chapters