See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

People that are so vile that they could harm children like that are better off as corpses. Mc should clean house completely on trash like that.

tell me your blessed without telling me your blessed to be free of those types of worries.

Alas your ability is but a farce my young padawan.

Wait... does it matter if she leeches off his power. She's his woman so of course he would help her power up. The stronger she is the better off he is. It's not like she's stealing his chance at getting stronger.

This is a mistake. Never sacrifice the story your writing for a loud minority of people. You can never satisfy everyone. Although he could have revealed nothing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I take back what I said they are both idiots.

Why leave a fine peice of meat. I mean she's obviously smarter than he is so if nothing else why not utilize her. She can work hard to show the mc she's truly sorry.

A professional wrestler? Like is that supposed to be awesome. They aren't exactly very strong lol.

This makes no sense. I had plenty of capability to kill something for the first time. Hunters do it all the time. Soldiers kill other humans.

Bruh... I wish something like this could happen to me. A lawsuit could set me up for awhile.

So the mc is both a simp and misogynistic? You can't be both as that's an oxymoron.

Harem is one of the tags. Why would you introduce breakups in a harem novel? Definitely don't need flings as that's what the harem girls are for. The love thing was odd tho.

Meh everything about her screams desperate thot.

-.- this was... rather dumb imo. Highly doubt a waxed face would turn his wife on. Dudes face gonna be red and puffy for awhile after that stupidity.

Nap overly violent women like in anime are not my thing. Was ok while it lasted.

This makes no sense. 1. His father was alive and took out loans. 2. 30 kmh is hardly fatal heck he's not even Olympic material at that speed. 3. If you have super strength durability has to be there.