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This book need some serious editing to check the characters names. In my opinion the names should’ve been kept from original work, translating names is never a good idea…
I don’t think he knows she is married. She told his clone about having found someone inside the game but I don’t remember if she mentioned marriage at all. Anyways that was a conversation with Alex clone and not him, so I am not sure he is even aware of thar possibility.
So Gabby is a girl? A few chapters back I thought Gabby was weird short name for Gabriel, but I guess is a Gabriela then.
Wasn’t 10 minutes though?
Akela is a female? I had the impression it was a male from previous chapters…
Who calls a wolf Leo? 😅
Btw I am enjoying the story, keep up the good work dear author ☺️
The last sentence is incomplete ;)
So weird though she is called Elijah since in English that’s a man’s name
Red hair and bald? So is he semi bald?
Didn’t he brought up his sister though? I don’t know how old she was when adopted but I got the impression in the prologue he had been raising her for a while…