Nublyss

One word: Magic

Ah yes, the Sasuke Arc, and that went so well for him.

I know, the biggest hint being that the quest/mission wasn’t complete, which means there was more danger nearby. Also, the people said never to care about others with in the dream as they aren’t real. Or if you think they are real, then your survival matters more. It was well forshadowed. But what if the hero was being genuine? If the author wrote him to be an actual good person and they went their separate ways once the difficult situation was over. Then the hero would have been poisoned for no reason. The reason I say this is because I probably would have done most of the things that the hero did in this story. It is what it is.

Understandable.

Active, and the 3rd chapter is all most 10k as well, it just needs to be edited and some parts need a revisions. The main issue that caused the delay is that I got held up due to a car accident messing up my schedule.

Yep

Yes… Most likely.

This entire thing is kinda cringe, if the “hero” turned out to be an actual good guy, what would happen if he was willing to sacrifice himself to for Sunny? This whole twist is rather poor for me personally.

“Betraying the idea that he may be dead.” It the most appropriate change as it keeps the same idea but makes it more sensible.