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Mostly just preference For the MC slightly didnt like his attitude in everything. Too much cuss words I think, I dont have a problem with that but using it too much lowers the quality of the story Weird out about relation of everything like why make hashirama and tsunade same generation like they both have siblings. With nawaki that the naruto anime doesnt have much info you can write many thing there

Kinda weird. Because we all know that hashirama is tsunade's grand father why bother changing their relation. Would been better is just make him become nawaki or something

Why do I feel like the author changes, like the style of writing and also it does feel like its from manga anymore like the attitude and way of things and personality of the character

I regret not reading this review first, have the same opinion its like when the girls are with MC there minds degraded. Author just removed the personality of the heroines. I wasted time trying to wait for it to get better.

The heroines are a turn off for the novel. Why is it like all the heroines head is all dicks and sex. Like there mind and personality degraded

Just finish the novel. First [grammar] Its readable but author should have checked it for grammar error Second [18+ scene] Can't really imagine sa heroines of the story. How they express themselves how the interact have some difference in the anime. And the 18+ scenes are for some reason weird, doesnt actually feel something there. Third [last fight] That arc/scene is kinda bland. Even if you dont include it, it doesnt really matter

What happened to his system?

I think "cookie monster" is better than "cookie lord"

His money making is making this novel boring. I mean from the title itself shows that it about other dimension and here he is just making himself richer and richer. Its even shadowing the other events like healing sakura, going back to his gf in assassin classroom. Also MC sure is annoying with flirting with anyone then wont make them his. Like its already obvious but no there is no relationship between them just because he says so

Kazu-trash has given Haru the title Haru-trash