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Thousandleaf

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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf18h
    Commented

    This thing is getting worse as time pass and i don't understand why since you're doing it purposefully... the whole gaslight thing of the twins, the minotaurs milk, it simply took all that serious vibe from the begining and transformed the novel into something writted by a complete teenager kid.

    Ch 45 [End of the first day] [1]
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    Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
    Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf7mth
    Replied to lenny_lex

    I didn't even pass the 60th, i think? This novel is mediocre at best, and it is a bait too.

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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf1yr
    Posted

    This is not a novel about a true swordsman in world of magic, is story about a man who uses a sword plus other things. The sword is just there. I hoped the mc would use just his sword and swords skills to fight, but it isnt how it goes. His affinity ( a power in the novel) is so stupidly strong and exagerated that makes the sword aspect of his style look irrelevant. Why call him a sword god if you are going to give him a secondary power and one so rodiculous like that? Even the mc mentioned in the begining that he wants to be a magic swordsman... thats is not what a sword god should be.

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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf1yr
    Replied to Thousandleaf

    In terms of D&D, i hope that he continues on the path of an assassin, an shadow dancer instead of an sorcerer.

    Ch 107 Growing Shadow
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf1yr
    Commented

    Acctually, i hope that he doesn't grow to dependent of his shadows. Its okay to fortify them, but i'd prefer if, at the end of it all, he continues to be the main "weapon"... Just like Zed of LoL. I mean, i really doesn't want he to be like a necromancer of some sorts, using his shadows to battle for win, he being an assassin that uses his shadows for support is much more cool, for me.

    Ch 107 Growing Shadow
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    What about Vega? He was the second in command

    Ch 310 Chapter 310: Taking Over
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    Dude... The name of the beach with his inheritance is in was orion beach, did you just gave it a random "legion beach" because you forgot? Jeez.....

    Ch 229 Chapter 229: House Arrest
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    What a lazy chapter. He see's a random ship, curiously read the ship's blueprint in the past (why tho?) and remembers exactly where is a specific room where the passangers keep their clothes? Lazy, shalow, lacks depht.

    Ch 225 Chapter 225: Oasis
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    this is too forced, too shalow.

    "Because both these rings share the technology, they're perfect. Both these rings have a tracker, but it's encrypted. Only the owner of the ring can use it to find where the owner of the other ring is and vice versa," he further said. 
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    Raia was a man not a woman and Lucian dissapeared 4 years ago not 8.

    "I need to tell Raia! She said he disappeared eight years ago! That means he'll be back in four years!" Predictor let out as he got off the bed. 
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Replied to MikeN

    In Brasil we don't have that kind of trouble with storms and floods ins beaches, the sea here is very calm.

    Outside, the trio went to the garage of the real estate building and got into Bruna's car. Almost 4 minutes after they left the property, Bruna said while driving, "You will love the house. On the street where the house is located, it is super quiet, and the house is just a few blocks from the sea and the boardwalk."
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    "did you talk to Luan?" its the correct sentence

    "Mom, could you talk to Luan?" A 175 cm tall young woman with long white hair asked.
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    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    Gods, not Kamila again.... Jesus no, ffs, just no!!

    Ch 1482 Motherly Duties (Part 2)
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf2yr
    Commented

    F

    "I have never betrayed the City of Silver…"
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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf3yr
    Commented

    WHAAAAT?

    Zogar Vastor, the third greatest Healer of the Griffon Kingdom also known as the Master, brought the black sphere to his chest, letting it seep inside his body.
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf3yr
    Replied to Kwanky

    Not really, the spell said that it was better IF the companion was of the same element, but it doesn't have to be.... It will just be weaker.

    "Breath" from his body and mental energy were expended as a half-transparent snake twelve meters long appeared in front of him.
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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf3yr
    Replied to Eveofchaos

    Its because you did not tagged the novel as R-18, that's why it's automatically censored.

    "The common soldiers are tired and sleepy. I believe that they did nothing but **** those women these days. You are lucky, Noah."
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    Birth of the Demonic Sword
    Eastern · Eveofchaos
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf3yr
    Replied to Evernightlord

    No problem mate, i like your novel, i just think that it can get really better without the typos. Good work.

    Ch 98 Secrets of Past(Part-1)
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    Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
    Fantasy · Evernightlord
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  • Thousandleaf
    Thousandleaf3yr
    Commented

    I really want to understand how can a chapter full of erros like this one be on premium. I did not comment on the free chapters because it was free but this is premium, it CAN'T be crappy like this.

    Ch 98 Secrets of Past(Part-1)
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    Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
    Fantasy · Evernightlord
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